Comments received on poems by AstrumVir
who
sorenbarrett said:
This is satirical and amusing at the same time it speaks of hypocrisy nicely written
March 12th, 2026 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
This is satirical and amusing at the same time it speaks of hypocrisy nicely written
March 12th, 2026 15:32
love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem fills the gambit of what we hold dear. Love such a complicated word bleeds into so many emotions. A lovely (another usage) poem with great rhyme and well metered. Nicely done
March 11th, 2026 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem fills the gambit of what we hold dear. Love such a complicated word bleeds into so many emotions. A lovely (another usage) poem with great rhyme and well metered. Nicely done
March 11th, 2026 07:07
Witching hour
sorenbarrett said:
So many ask the question of what they will do when they are dead. Nice symbolism in night and day as to night and light. Well written
March 10th, 2026 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
So many ask the question of what they will do when they are dead. Nice symbolism in night and day as to night and light. Well written
March 10th, 2026 16:07
HOPE
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem that starts off promising speaking of love and trust and ends on a down note that is lightened by hope, Well done
March 6th, 2026 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem that starts off promising speaking of love and trust and ends on a down note that is lightened by hope, Well done
March 6th, 2026 16:04
Father
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is for all. Nature\'s true justice from which none escape. Nicely written
March 5th, 2026 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is for all. Nature\'s true justice from which none escape. Nicely written
March 5th, 2026 11:29
