Comments received on poems by Ociel
Funeral of \'you and me\'
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely a feeling of being out of place and not belonging. Well written
April 2nd, 2026 18:20
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely a feeling of being out of place and not belonging. Well written
April 2nd, 2026 18:20
Jack of all trades,master of none
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that emphasizes the need to be the best at something. I gave up on that years ago. There will always be someone better in a world of eight billion the odds are pretty small and that doesn\'t count coming and past generations. It is better far to be a generalist in a world of specialists what happened to the doctor you knew and trusted could call and get in the same day. He may not be able to do brain surgery but likely I won\'t need it. When you work your muscles they told me not to overdevelop one part it will look weird and will cause you trouble develop them all the same. Maybe not the biggest biceps but at least they are all in proportion. A good write in a world where everyone wants to be known for something.
March 22nd, 2026 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that emphasizes the need to be the best at something. I gave up on that years ago. There will always be someone better in a world of eight billion the odds are pretty small and that doesn\'t count coming and past generations. It is better far to be a generalist in a world of specialists what happened to the doctor you knew and trusted could call and get in the same day. He may not be able to do brain surgery but likely I won\'t need it. When you work your muscles they told me not to overdevelop one part it will look weird and will cause you trouble develop them all the same. Maybe not the biggest biceps but at least they are all in proportion. A good write in a world where everyone wants to be known for something.
March 22nd, 2026 15:02
Gaze.
sorenbarrett said:
Some beautiful lines in this poem that rings of faith. It is very nicely put together a fave
March 18th, 2026 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
Some beautiful lines in this poem that rings of faith. It is very nicely put together a fave
March 18th, 2026 14:47
I just wasn\'t the one.
sorenbarrett said:
What we think matters at one point is not what it takes to get what we want much of the time. A harsh truth learned too late. Maybe it is not us that is the problem but rather what society tells us. Well done
March 17th, 2026 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
What we think matters at one point is not what it takes to get what we want much of the time. A harsh truth learned too late. Maybe it is not us that is the problem but rather what society tells us. Well done
March 17th, 2026 18:36
