Comments received on poems by starr
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME STARR - WOW this is an awesome first poem ! I love the descriptions of yourself - formidable ! I am - the Night Sky (above me)- the Ground (beneath me) - Time (from you Ma) - Love (expressed according to your Lover !) Broken Glass (from your PA). I never underestimate a Lady (or a Man) and I have been hurt and helped - depending on my attitude - BRILLIANT POEM IN FORM & CONTENT - BRIAN
May 6th, 2016 10:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME STARR - WOW this is an awesome first poem ! I love the descriptions of yourself - formidable ! I am - the Night Sky (above me)- the Ground (beneath me) - Time (from you Ma) - Love (expressed according to your Lover !) Broken Glass (from your PA). I never underestimate a Lady (or a Man) and I have been hurt and helped - depending on my attitude - BRILLIANT POEM IN FORM & CONTENT - BRIAN
May 6th, 2016 10:36