Comments received on poems by tayne
Cracks Below
sorenbarrett said:
It is the it that poses the question and makes one wonder. Very nice
April 5th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
It is the it that poses the question and makes one wonder. Very nice
April 5th, 2026 13:03
Try Harder
sorenbarrett said:
This poem raised several thoughts in me regarding striving for a goal and how hard we are willing to try why some succeed and others fail. How much do we want something and how much is it someone else\'s desire. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem raised several thoughts in me regarding striving for a goal and how hard we are willing to try why some succeed and others fail. How much do we want something and how much is it someone else\'s desire. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2026 03:58
Stained Again
sorenbarrett said:
This creates a mental picture that is hard to erase. Well done
March 30th, 2026 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
This creates a mental picture that is hard to erase. Well done
March 30th, 2026 19:07
The Rusted Door
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor indeed it speaks to me of memories locked away. Well done
March 29th, 2026 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor indeed it speaks to me of memories locked away. Well done
March 29th, 2026 14:45
What Remains, Returns.
sorenbarrett said:
Somewhat cryptic this poem speaks of an entity unknown. Well done it leaves a mystery
March 27th, 2026 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Somewhat cryptic this poem speaks of an entity unknown. Well done it leaves a mystery
March 27th, 2026 13:59
Hidden Melancholy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss in darkness where no one cares. Well done
March 26th, 2026 18:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss in darkness where no one cares. Well done
March 26th, 2026 18:24
A Lost Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS. Your poem reads of isolation and alienation a feeling of not belonging or being welcome. It is empty and without friends or family and in this hollowness there is the echo of pain. It is sad and asks for affiliation. Well penned
March 25th, 2026 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS. Your poem reads of isolation and alienation a feeling of not belonging or being welcome. It is empty and without friends or family and in this hollowness there is the echo of pain. It is sad and asks for affiliation. Well penned
March 25th, 2026 06:59
A Lost Soul
Katie B. said:
No end to the pain, no end inn sight . . . Heavy, gut wrenching. I have been here more times than I care to say.
Blessings, peace, Katie
March 25th, 2026 06:31
Katie B. said:
No end to the pain, no end inn sight . . . Heavy, gut wrenching. I have been here more times than I care to say.
Blessings, peace, Katie
March 25th, 2026 06:31
