Comments received on poems by jade_rbr
Pain is all I feel
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know you, that is correct. Glad you shared - get it off your chest. Your story sounds fairly familiar, so there\'s no need to feel a stranger here - you will find you are among many friends........
March 28th, 2026 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know you, that is correct. Glad you shared - get it off your chest. Your story sounds fairly familiar, so there\'s no need to feel a stranger here - you will find you are among many friends........
March 28th, 2026 05:10
Pain is all I feel
sorenbarrett said:
For a first poem in a language that is not your first language I would say you did very well. There is rawness in it and in that feeling you express the pain well. Keep up the good work and welcome to the site and to poetry
March 27th, 2026 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
For a first poem in a language that is not your first language I would say you did very well. There is rawness in it and in that feeling you express the pain well. Keep up the good work and welcome to the site and to poetry
March 27th, 2026 19:45
Pain is all I feel
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around mental health, loneliness, and the longing for connection. The poet expresses a sense of isolation and the difficulty in conveying their emotional state to those around them, while also hinting at the idea that true understanding requires deeper observation. Welcome Jade
March 27th, 2026 19:14
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around mental health, loneliness, and the longing for connection. The poet expresses a sense of isolation and the difficulty in conveying their emotional state to those around them, while also hinting at the idea that true understanding requires deeper observation. Welcome Jade
March 27th, 2026 19:14
