Comments received on poems by Arun Kumar Siliveru
Our Shadow
Thomas W Case said:
Reflective and rhythmic—this reads like a steady meditation on what follows us, unshaken, through every version of ourselves.
The grit is in the contrast: all our turbulence set against something that simply stays.
April 19th, 2026 08:38
Thomas W Case said:
Reflective and rhythmic—this reads like a steady meditation on what follows us, unshaken, through every version of ourselves.
The grit is in the contrast: all our turbulence set against something that simply stays.
April 19th, 2026 08:38
Our Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
This works in metaphor for the shadow is us an image painted in the absence of light. A slave to our every action. Nicely projected here.
April 19th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
This works in metaphor for the shadow is us an image painted in the absence of light. A slave to our every action. Nicely projected here.
April 19th, 2026 04:30
Eyes Lips Hair
sorenbarrett said:
Mythical and from the Greek mythology nicely written it speaks out to the reader. Well done
April 9th, 2026 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
Mythical and from the Greek mythology nicely written it speaks out to the reader. Well done
April 9th, 2026 13:28
The Man who composed Eternal Music
sorenbarrett said:
A very creative poem where mourning is represented in musical action and sound. Well done
April 1st, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
A very creative poem where mourning is represented in musical action and sound. Well done
April 1st, 2026 12:41
