Comments received on poems by never be
Wall Banana
Tristan Robert Lange said:
never be, hahaha...this feels like conceptual art having a nervous breakdown on the wall. 😂 I’m into the absurdity. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 06:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
never be, hahaha...this feels like conceptual art having a nervous breakdown on the wall. 😂 I’m into the absurdity. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 28th, 2026 06:43
Wall Banana
sorenbarrett said:
What is art to one is not to another it like beauty is in the eye of the beholder and may change from one era to another. That is the beauty of it. Nicely done.
September 27th, 2026 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
What is art to one is not to another it like beauty is in the eye of the beholder and may change from one era to another. That is the beauty of it. Nicely done.
September 27th, 2026 19:03
Monkeyman
Tristan Robert Lange said:
never be, hahaha...that went exactly where I hoped it would. 😂 Poor Monkeyman never stood a chance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2026 06:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
never be, hahaha...that went exactly where I hoped it would. 😂 Poor Monkeyman never stood a chance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2026 06:58
Monkeyman
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting although I am not familiar with the Code Monkey
September 26th, 2026 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting although I am not familiar with the Code Monkey
September 26th, 2026 18:19
Most High
Tristan Robert Lange said:
never be, haha…this gave me a grin. Such a tiny little jab at modern distraction. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 25th, 2026 22:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
never be, haha…this gave me a grin. Such a tiny little jab at modern distraction. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 25th, 2026 22:32
Schizophrenia & Halperdol
sorenbarrett said:
With metaphor this poem searches the mind of schizophrenia with its associations. Nicely done
September 19th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
With metaphor this poem searches the mind of schizophrenia with its associations. Nicely done
September 19th, 2026 04:02
I am Losing my Creativity
sorenbarrett said:
Good questions lead to distrust and further questioning. There is much that is real in this and where does it grow into unhealthy distrust. Nicely written
September 19th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Good questions lead to distrust and further questioning. There is much that is real in this and where does it grow into unhealthy distrust. Nicely written
September 19th, 2026 03:57
Jimmy Wimmy
sorenbarrett said:
The strong always take advantage of the weak. Nicely said
September 4th, 2026 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
The strong always take advantage of the weak. Nicely said
September 4th, 2026 19:45
My Australian Raven
Butter said:
I have always enjoyed a short sweet poem that slows the resenting mind and allows it to dive into the harmonious words.:3
August 20th, 2026 03:44
Butter said:
I have always enjoyed a short sweet poem that slows the resenting mind and allows it to dive into the harmonious words.:3
August 20th, 2026 03:44
Cube.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a wonderfully mind-bending meditation. Geometry expands beyond visual comprehension, and language begins failing at precisely the same boundary. The result feels mathematical and philosophical at once. Excellent work, never be. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 19:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a wonderfully mind-bending meditation. Geometry expands beyond visual comprehension, and language begins failing at precisely the same boundary. The result feels mathematical and philosophical at once. Excellent work, never be. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 19:03
Cube.
sorenbarrett said:
(-1)=1=2=3=4=5+... = -1/12 infinite series for pi. Math is the ultimate philosophy and poetry the formula for emotions.
August 17th, 2026 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
(-1)=1=2=3=4=5+... = -1/12 infinite series for pi. Math is the ultimate philosophy and poetry the formula for emotions.
August 17th, 2026 12:38
To Gander at Harmas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is delightfully off-kilter. It starts with curiosity and ends somewhere between cosmic speculation and a warning label from another dimension. Clever and fun as hell. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is delightfully off-kilter. It starts with curiosity and ends somewhere between cosmic speculation and a warning label from another dimension. Clever and fun as hell. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 07:57
To Gander at Harmas
sorenbarrett said:
Cosmic in nature this poem speaks of constellations. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
Cosmic in nature this poem speaks of constellations. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 20:08
Oh Look, a book ver. 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Never Be, this is wonderfully concise…poems, short stories, throw them together and, oh look, a book! 🤣 Sometimes the simplest observations make the most entertaining little pieces. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Never Be, this is wonderfully concise…poems, short stories, throw them together and, oh look, a book! 🤣 Sometimes the simplest observations make the most entertaining little pieces. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:24
Oh Look, a book ver. 2
sorenbarrett said:
This short speaks of covering all pages of writing
August 10th, 2026 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
This short speaks of covering all pages of writing
August 10th, 2026 12:50
Oh Look, a Book.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Short, sweet, and wonderfully writerly, never be! There’s something satisfying about simply declaring the work being made without dressing it up...a book, poems, stories, and onward we go. And congrats on the collection of short stories and poems. Let me know when it drops, I will totalyl support it. Keep creating, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Short, sweet, and wonderfully writerly, never be! There’s something satisfying about simply declaring the work being made without dressing it up...a book, poems, stories, and onward we go. And congrats on the collection of short stories and poems. Let me know when it drops, I will totalyl support it. Keep creating, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:32
Draft 6 pt. 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one wild ride…it feels like stepping into a mind where fantasy, internet culture, mythology, and conspiracy all collide without ever slowing down. The sheer unpredictability kept me turning the page. Quite the surreal piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one wild ride…it feels like stepping into a mind where fantasy, internet culture, mythology, and conspiracy all collide without ever slowing down. The sheer unpredictability kept me turning the page. Quite the surreal piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:46
A Walk Threw Hail
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal story that takes one through a dream like vision. Well done
August 5th, 2026 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal story that takes one through a dream like vision. Well done
August 5th, 2026 17:24
Draft 6 pt. 2
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting tale with an abrupt ending. Well done.
August 4th, 2026 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting tale with an abrupt ending. Well done.
August 4th, 2026 15:08
Draft 6 pt. 1
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a wildly uninhibited venture beyond your familiar territory! The arrival of Emily gives the surrounding delirium a clearer direction, so making this the first installment feels natural. I also love that your intended failure transformed itself into an unexpected ascent...sometimes the character seizes the story from the writer. I’m interested to see what happens next! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a wildly uninhibited venture beyond your familiar territory! The arrival of Emily gives the surrounding delirium a clearer direction, so making this the first installment feels natural. I also love that your intended failure transformed itself into an unexpected ascent...sometimes the character seizes the story from the writer. I’m interested to see what happens next! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 08:00
Draft 6 pt. 1
sorenbarrett said:
A short story in the making that the reader is told is still to be reworked. Nice
August 4th, 2026 02:54
sorenbarrett said:
A short story in the making that the reader is told is still to be reworked. Nice
August 4th, 2026 02:54
I am looking for a writing partner.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never be, this is an honest and heartfelt request. I appreciate how clear you are about what you’re looking for in a collaborator and what you hope to create together. I truly hope the right writing partner crosses your path and the two of you make something special. All the best, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never be, this is an honest and heartfelt request. I appreciate how clear you are about what you’re looking for in a collaborator and what you hope to create together. I truly hope the right writing partner crosses your path and the two of you make something special. All the best, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:52
I am looking for a writing partner.
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting a plea for partnership. Well done
August 2nd, 2026 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting a plea for partnership. Well done
August 2nd, 2026 14:45
I am looking for a writing partner.
never be said:
The image up top was a filter. I don\'t want to work with someone who is against the Nazis, KKK, and other groups that are seen as hateful, for the story will have the main character working for both. He is meant to become the grand wizard of the KKK before moving to Antarctica, where he will have his penis ridden. If this isn\'t up your alley, don\'t help me; or we can find a middle ground.
August 2nd, 2026 14:04
never be said:
The image up top was a filter. I don\'t want to work with someone who is against the Nazis, KKK, and other groups that are seen as hateful, for the story will have the main character working for both. He is meant to become the grand wizard of the KKK before moving to Antarctica, where he will have his penis ridden. If this isn\'t up your alley, don\'t help me; or we can find a middle ground.
August 2nd, 2026 14:04
Infinity Stones—Mine (a repost)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a wildly inventive concept! The second entry especially opens the door to glorious chaos...and the whole framework had my mind inventing characters and conflicts immediately. I sincerely hope you share the remaining two! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a wildly inventive concept! The second entry especially opens the door to glorious chaos...and the whole framework had my mind inventing characters and conflicts immediately. I sincerely hope you share the remaining two! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:49
I think that it\'s bullshit. That\'s my subjective.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like the kind of internal argument we’ve all had at one time or another…trying to make sense of our own reactions while still feeling convinced we’re right. I found that relatable, my friend. Great job on this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like the kind of internal argument we’ve all had at one time or another…trying to make sense of our own reactions while still feeling convinced we’re right. I found that relatable, my friend. Great job on this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:35
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