Comments received on poems by never be
I am looking for a writing partner.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never be, this is an honest and heartfelt request. I appreciate how clear you are about what you’re looking for in a collaborator and what you hope to create together. I truly hope the right writing partner crosses your path and the two of you make something special. All the best, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never be, this is an honest and heartfelt request. I appreciate how clear you are about what you’re looking for in a collaborator and what you hope to create together. I truly hope the right writing partner crosses your path and the two of you make something special. All the best, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:52
What a Disappointment.
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
Instagram: @akiraa_artly
Gmail: [email protected]
August 3rd, 2026 10:51
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
Instagram: @akiraa_artly
Gmail: [email protected]
August 3rd, 2026 10:51
3 rd draft. not finished.
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
Instagram: @akiraa_artly
Gmail: [email protected]
August 3rd, 2026 10:18
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
Instagram: @akiraa_artly
Gmail: [email protected]
August 3rd, 2026 10:18
I am looking for a writing partner.
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting a plea for partnership. Well done
August 2nd, 2026 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting a plea for partnership. Well done
August 2nd, 2026 14:45
I am looking for a writing partner.
never be said:
The image up top was a filter. I don\'t want to work with someone who is against the Nazis, KKK, and other groups that are seen as hateful, for the story will have the main character working for both. He is meant to become the grand wizard of the KKK before moving to Antarctica, where he will have his penis ridden. If this isn\'t up your alley, don\'t help me; or we can find a middle ground.
August 2nd, 2026 14:04
never be said:
The image up top was a filter. I don\'t want to work with someone who is against the Nazis, KKK, and other groups that are seen as hateful, for the story will have the main character working for both. He is meant to become the grand wizard of the KKK before moving to Antarctica, where he will have his penis ridden. If this isn\'t up your alley, don\'t help me; or we can find a middle ground.
August 2nd, 2026 14:04
Infinity Stones—Mine (a repost)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a wildly inventive concept! The second entry especially opens the door to glorious chaos...and the whole framework had my mind inventing characters and conflicts immediately. I sincerely hope you share the remaining two! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a wildly inventive concept! The second entry especially opens the door to glorious chaos...and the whole framework had my mind inventing characters and conflicts immediately. I sincerely hope you share the remaining two! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:49
I think that it\'s bullshit. That\'s my subjective.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like the kind of internal argument we’ve all had at one time or another…trying to make sense of our own reactions while still feeling convinced we’re right. I found that relatable, my friend. Great job on this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like the kind of internal argument we’ve all had at one time or another…trying to make sense of our own reactions while still feeling convinced we’re right. I found that relatable, my friend. Great job on this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:35
Infinity Stones—Mine (a repost)
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mystical powers in stones. Well done
August 1st, 2026 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mystical powers in stones. Well done
August 1st, 2026 16:48
I think that it\'s bullshit. That\'s my subjective.
Megan Blaney said:
What a silly reason to be offended. It seems it is easy these days to offend others.
August 1st, 2026 07:25
Megan Blaney said:
What a silly reason to be offended. It seems it is easy these days to offend others.
August 1st, 2026 07:25
I think that it\'s bullshit. That\'s my subjective.
sorenbarrett said:
People are offended easily and it seems that the least little thing will set someone off.
August 1st, 2026 03:11
sorenbarrett said:
People are offended easily and it seems that the least little thing will set someone off.
August 1st, 2026 03:11
Draft 5.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one hell of a ride! I respect the creative fearlessness of building an entire reality with its own rules and refusing to tame it for easy consumption. Beneath all the wild invention, the instability of identity gives the piece a genuinely disturbing weight. Wildly original work! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one hell of a ride! I respect the creative fearlessness of building an entire reality with its own rules and refusing to tame it for easy consumption. Beneath all the wild invention, the instability of identity gives the piece a genuinely disturbing weight. Wildly original work! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:56
Grass Fields
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard. The grief of feeling estranged from your own mind is enormous…especially when you remember how naturally thought and creativity once came. Raw, vulnerable, and deeply moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 21:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard. The grief of feeling estranged from your own mind is enormous…especially when you remember how naturally thought and creativity once came. Raw, vulnerable, and deeply moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 21:08
My Australian Raven
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, my friend. Beneath the gothic romance is a profoundly human desire not merely to belong to another, but to be wanted just as fiercely. That vulnerability gives this real power. 🥀🖤💀🙏
July 28th, 2026 20:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, my friend. Beneath the gothic romance is a profoundly human desire not merely to belong to another, but to be wanted just as fiercely. That vulnerability gives this real power. 🥀🖤💀🙏
July 28th, 2026 20:37
My Australian Raven
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and well rhymed it speaks of a rather dark romance
July 27th, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and well rhymed it speaks of a rather dark romance
July 27th, 2026 11:00
What a Disappointment.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I understand grieving something even after learning it was never real. The loss remains emotionally genuine because the experience and everything attached to it mattered. This is deeply vulnerable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I understand grieving something even after learning it was never real. The loss remains emotionally genuine because the experience and everything attached to it mattered. This is deeply vulnerable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:16
The Poem Vanished
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a delightfully cryptic little piece! It feels like memory has wandered off with the manuscript while the speaker can only marvel at the resulting mess. Loved the dry humor here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 17:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a delightfully cryptic little piece! It feels like memory has wandered off with the manuscript while the speaker can only marvel at the resulting mess. Loved the dry humor here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 17:57
What a Disappointment.
sorenbarrett said:
How thoughts can be twisted very nicely written in this piece.
July 26th, 2026 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
How thoughts can be twisted very nicely written in this piece.
July 26th, 2026 14:32
The Poem Vanished
Michael Edwards said:
Brain blockage today
I’m not sure where I’m going
But the journeys good
July 25th, 2026 17:42
Michael Edwards said:
Brain blockage today
I’m not sure where I’m going
But the journeys good
July 25th, 2026 17:42
The Poem Vanished
sorenbarrett said:
That has happened to me on comments before so I know what you mean. Well done
July 25th, 2026 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
That has happened to me on comments before so I know what you mean. Well done
July 25th, 2026 17:26
Version four. As finished as it\'s going to get.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never Be, I know what it is to feel burdened by other people’s ideas of who I should become. This takes that pressure to a wildly surreal extreme...until the person underneath practically disappears beneath everyone else’s projected destiny. Powerful piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never Be, I know what it is to feel burdened by other people’s ideas of who I should become. This takes that pressure to a wildly surreal extreme...until the person underneath practically disappears beneath everyone else’s projected destiny. Powerful piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:32
I should have wrote
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, never be! This made me laugh because the failed attempt becomes the success. Fatigue dismantles both grammar and ambition...yet somehow produces one very effective little poem. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, never be! This made me laugh because the failed attempt becomes the success. Fatigue dismantles both grammar and ambition...yet somehow produces one very effective little poem. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:08
Version four. As finished as it\'s going to get.
sorenbarrett said:
The sexual exploits in life\'s journey of a man from childhood to latter life. Nicely written with some rhyme
July 23rd, 2026 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
The sexual exploits in life\'s journey of a man from childhood to latter life. Nicely written with some rhyme
July 23rd, 2026 07:53
I should have wrote
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is something I have felt before
July 22nd, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is something I have felt before
July 22nd, 2026 09:57
3 rd draft. not finished.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for giving us the story behind this, Never Be. Knowing it is a collaboration with another resident helps me understand the overflowing mixture of voices, references, and ideas. I would not call it pathetic at all…it is unfinished, ambitious, and still discovering what it wants to become. Let the short story develop before demanding polish from it. There is something genuinely alive here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 17:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for giving us the story behind this, Never Be. Knowing it is a collaboration with another resident helps me understand the overflowing mixture of voices, references, and ideas. I would not call it pathetic at all…it is unfinished, ambitious, and still discovering what it wants to become. Let the short story develop before demanding polish from it. There is something genuinely alive here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 17:26
3 rd draft. not finished.
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the real the imagined and the fantastic this write elaborates on the qualities of a certain character. Well done
July 21st, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the real the imagined and the fantastic this write elaborates on the qualities of a certain character. Well done
July 21st, 2026 04:17
You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is disgusting, ridiculous, and genuinely excellent advice, my friend! Writers improve by producing work, examining the wreckage, and returning to the porcelain page wiser than before. Now please light a match! 🤣💩🖤🙏
July 20th, 2026 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is disgusting, ridiculous, and genuinely excellent advice, my friend! Writers improve by producing work, examining the wreckage, and returning to the porcelain page wiser than before. Now please light a match! 🤣💩🖤🙏
July 20th, 2026 08:25
You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
Demar Desu said:
Let me take a wizz first
July 20th, 2026 07:06
Demar Desu said:
Let me take a wizz first
July 20th, 2026 07:06
You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
Friendship said:
nicely said
July 19th, 2026 17:39
Friendship said:
nicely said
July 19th, 2026 17:39
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