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You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
Friendship said:
nicely said
July 19th, 2026 17:39
Friendship said:
nicely said
July 19th, 2026 17:39
You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view where one used to say garbage in garbage out.
July 19th, 2026 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view where one used to say garbage in garbage out.
July 19th, 2026 16:19
No coffee this time. Bite me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what the actual fuck did I just read? 😂 This is a gloriously unhinged plunge through craving, literature, bodily catastrophe, and forbidden nostalgia. One hell of a ride! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what the actual fuck did I just read? 😂 This is a gloriously unhinged plunge through craving, literature, bodily catastrophe, and forbidden nostalgia. One hell of a ride! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:51
No coffee this time. Bite me.
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual this sounds like a horny poem
July 18th, 2026 18:18
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual this sounds like a horny poem
July 18th, 2026 18:18
No coffee this time. Bite me.
never be said:
I\'m sure that Shakespeare is a strange god for some, but according to my older brother, he\'s met people who think that Shakespeare was a 12-year-old black girl, not to say that I am perfect myself.
July 18th, 2026 17:31
never be said:
I\'m sure that Shakespeare is a strange god for some, but according to my older brother, he\'s met people who think that Shakespeare was a 12-year-old black girl, not to say that I am perfect myself.
July 18th, 2026 17:31
Death to magic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a surreal and biting piece, my friend! The old mysteries are condemned, their practitioners destroyed, and machines are enthroned in their place. Yet technology becomes another form of enchantment...complete with sacred objects, unquestioned power, and devoted believers. One heck of a write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a surreal and biting piece, my friend! The old mysteries are condemned, their practitioners destroyed, and machines are enthroned in their place. Yet technology becomes another form of enchantment...complete with sacred objects, unquestioned power, and devoted believers. One heck of a write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:20
Death to magic
sorenbarrett said:
What is technology today would have been magic in the past. Well written and I would say death to magic as well all technology of modern times including cars. One might leave what to us seems most basic. Fire, wheel, basic tools, even electricity take away.
July 17th, 2026 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
What is technology today would have been magic in the past. Well written and I would say death to magic as well all technology of modern times including cars. One might leave what to us seems most basic. Fire, wheel, basic tools, even electricity take away.
July 17th, 2026 19:05
That\'s One Spicy Green Rock
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly got me in - a yarn well told with a deeper message than the superficial characteristics of the two main protagonists might suggest.
July 17th, 2026 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly got me in - a yarn well told with a deeper message than the superficial characteristics of the two main protagonists might suggest.
July 17th, 2026 18:34
Moonman, I Want to Write About Thee
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a surreal piece, my friend! Corporate nostalgia mutates into occult extremism, and the absurdity only makes the underlying hatred feel more grotesque. Dark, strange, and deeply unsettling work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a surreal piece, my friend! Corporate nostalgia mutates into occult extremism, and the absurdity only makes the underlying hatred feel more grotesque. Dark, strange, and deeply unsettling work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:21
Moonman, I Want to Write About Thee
sorenbarrett said:
Fable indeed in this poem of invention. It took a couple of readings to decide I knew little to nothing about the subject recognizing runes and kabbalah but little else. A fun read
July 17th, 2026 03:09
sorenbarrett said:
Fable indeed in this poem of invention. It took a couple of readings to decide I knew little to nothing about the subject recognizing runes and kabbalah but little else. A fun read
July 17th, 2026 03:09
Lick my balls
Tristan Robert Lange said:
well, well
if i must..
i don’t lick
but i’ll bust
those balls:
before all the fun stalls:
well, well
if i must.
Couldn\'t resist, my friend. 😅 Thanks for the laugh this morning. 🤣 A fave from me for making me smile.
July 11th, 2026 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
well, well
if i must..
i don’t lick
but i’ll bust
those balls:
before all the fun stalls:
well, well
if i must.
Couldn\'t resist, my friend. 😅 Thanks for the laugh this morning. 🤣 A fave from me for making me smile.
July 11th, 2026 07:56
Lick my balls
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a canine type of poem, maybe feline either will do. Interesting
July 11th, 2026 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a canine type of poem, maybe feline either will do. Interesting
July 11th, 2026 05:13
Word Girl (A Fanfic)
sorenbarrett said:
We often talk to ourselves and sometimes don\'t listen and at others don\'t understand. The corpus colosseum links the two sides but there are traffic jams at times and things stall out. Well written
July 9th, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
We often talk to ourselves and sometimes don\'t listen and at others don\'t understand. The corpus colosseum links the two sides but there are traffic jams at times and things stall out. Well written
July 9th, 2026 13:25
I need my med back
sorenbarrett said:
A great first person unwinding of a reliance on medication to see the world as others do. It shows an unraveling of common perspectives on events and to gain reunification with common beliefs and view medications are needed. This has deep philosophical and ethical implications.
May 31st, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A great first person unwinding of a reliance on medication to see the world as others do. It shows an unraveling of common perspectives on events and to gain reunification with common beliefs and view medications are needed. This has deep philosophical and ethical implications.
May 31st, 2026 03:52
I need my med back
never be said:
Urope would have beet hitler d-day or not... Hitler shouldn\'t hsve attacked russia in the mannor that he had.
May 30th, 2026 22:53
never be said:
Urope would have beet hitler d-day or not... Hitler shouldn\'t hsve attacked russia in the mannor that he had.
May 30th, 2026 22:53
I want to read again
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic confession stitched with desire and an appeal for a healing elixir. Very nicely written
May 27th, 2026 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic confession stitched with desire and an appeal for a healing elixir. Very nicely written
May 27th, 2026 20:25
Why am I this way?
sorenbarrett said:
A free writing with some internal rhyme that helps with the flow. Nicely done
May 25th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A free writing with some internal rhyme that helps with the flow. Nicely done
May 25th, 2026 04:08
That\'s One Spicy Green Rock
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of comic strips and comedian in a back and forth. Well written with some satire and fun. Well done
May 18th, 2026 15:25
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of comic strips and comedian in a back and forth. Well written with some satire and fun. Well done
May 18th, 2026 15:25
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