Comments received on poems by never be
What a Disappointment.
sorenbarrett said:
How thoughts can be twisted very nicely written in this piece.
July 26th, 2026 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
How thoughts can be twisted very nicely written in this piece.
July 26th, 2026 14:32
The Poem Vanished
Michael Edwards said:
Brain blockage today
I’m not sure where I’m going
But the journeys good
July 25th, 2026 17:42
Michael Edwards said:
Brain blockage today
I’m not sure where I’m going
But the journeys good
July 25th, 2026 17:42
The Poem Vanished
sorenbarrett said:
That has happened to me on comments before so I know what you mean. Well done
July 25th, 2026 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
That has happened to me on comments before so I know what you mean. Well done
July 25th, 2026 17:26
Version four. As finished as it\'s going to get.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never Be, I know what it is to feel burdened by other people’s ideas of who I should become. This takes that pressure to a wildly surreal extreme...until the person underneath practically disappears beneath everyone else’s projected destiny. Powerful piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Never Be, I know what it is to feel burdened by other people’s ideas of who I should become. This takes that pressure to a wildly surreal extreme...until the person underneath practically disappears beneath everyone else’s projected destiny. Powerful piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:32
I should have wrote
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, never be! This made me laugh because the failed attempt becomes the success. Fatigue dismantles both grammar and ambition...yet somehow produces one very effective little poem. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, never be! This made me laugh because the failed attempt becomes the success. Fatigue dismantles both grammar and ambition...yet somehow produces one very effective little poem. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:08
Version four. As finished as it\'s going to get.
sorenbarrett said:
The sexual exploits in life\'s journey of a man from childhood to latter life. Nicely written with some rhyme
July 23rd, 2026 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
The sexual exploits in life\'s journey of a man from childhood to latter life. Nicely written with some rhyme
July 23rd, 2026 07:53
I should have wrote
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is something I have felt before
July 22nd, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is something I have felt before
July 22nd, 2026 09:57
3 rd draft. not finished.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for giving us the story behind this, Never Be. Knowing it is a collaboration with another resident helps me understand the overflowing mixture of voices, references, and ideas. I would not call it pathetic at all…it is unfinished, ambitious, and still discovering what it wants to become. Let the short story develop before demanding polish from it. There is something genuinely alive here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 17:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for giving us the story behind this, Never Be. Knowing it is a collaboration with another resident helps me understand the overflowing mixture of voices, references, and ideas. I would not call it pathetic at all…it is unfinished, ambitious, and still discovering what it wants to become. Let the short story develop before demanding polish from it. There is something genuinely alive here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 17:26
3 rd draft. not finished.
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the real the imagined and the fantastic this write elaborates on the qualities of a certain character. Well done
July 21st, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A blend of the real the imagined and the fantastic this write elaborates on the qualities of a certain character. Well done
July 21st, 2026 04:17
You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is disgusting, ridiculous, and genuinely excellent advice, my friend! Writers improve by producing work, examining the wreckage, and returning to the porcelain page wiser than before. Now please light a match! 🤣💩🖤🙏
July 20th, 2026 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is disgusting, ridiculous, and genuinely excellent advice, my friend! Writers improve by producing work, examining the wreckage, and returning to the porcelain page wiser than before. Now please light a match! 🤣💩🖤🙏
July 20th, 2026 08:25
You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
Demar Desu said:
Let me take a wizz first
July 20th, 2026 07:06
Demar Desu said:
Let me take a wizz first
July 20th, 2026 07:06
You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
Friendship said:
nicely said
July 19th, 2026 17:39
Friendship said:
nicely said
July 19th, 2026 17:39
You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view where one used to say garbage in garbage out.
July 19th, 2026 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view where one used to say garbage in garbage out.
July 19th, 2026 16:19
No coffee this time. Bite me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what the actual fuck did I just read? 😂 This is a gloriously unhinged plunge through craving, literature, bodily catastrophe, and forbidden nostalgia. One hell of a ride! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what the actual fuck did I just read? 😂 This is a gloriously unhinged plunge through craving, literature, bodily catastrophe, and forbidden nostalgia. One hell of a ride! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 19th, 2026 06:51
No coffee this time. Bite me.
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual this sounds like a horny poem
July 18th, 2026 18:18
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual this sounds like a horny poem
July 18th, 2026 18:18
No coffee this time. Bite me.
never be said:
I\'m sure that Shakespeare is a strange god for some, but according to my older brother, he\'s met people who think that Shakespeare was a 12-year-old black girl, not to say that I am perfect myself.
July 18th, 2026 17:31
never be said:
I\'m sure that Shakespeare is a strange god for some, but according to my older brother, he\'s met people who think that Shakespeare was a 12-year-old black girl, not to say that I am perfect myself.
July 18th, 2026 17:31
Death to magic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a surreal and biting piece, my friend! The old mysteries are condemned, their practitioners destroyed, and machines are enthroned in their place. Yet technology becomes another form of enchantment...complete with sacred objects, unquestioned power, and devoted believers. One heck of a write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a surreal and biting piece, my friend! The old mysteries are condemned, their practitioners destroyed, and machines are enthroned in their place. Yet technology becomes another form of enchantment...complete with sacred objects, unquestioned power, and devoted believers. One heck of a write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:20
Death to magic
sorenbarrett said:
What is technology today would have been magic in the past. Well written and I would say death to magic as well all technology of modern times including cars. One might leave what to us seems most basic. Fire, wheel, basic tools, even electricity take away.
July 17th, 2026 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
What is technology today would have been magic in the past. Well written and I would say death to magic as well all technology of modern times including cars. One might leave what to us seems most basic. Fire, wheel, basic tools, even electricity take away.
July 17th, 2026 19:05
That\'s One Spicy Green Rock
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly got me in - a yarn well told with a deeper message than the superficial characteristics of the two main protagonists might suggest.
July 17th, 2026 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly got me in - a yarn well told with a deeper message than the superficial characteristics of the two main protagonists might suggest.
July 17th, 2026 18:34
Moonman, I Want to Write About Thee
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a surreal piece, my friend! Corporate nostalgia mutates into occult extremism, and the absurdity only makes the underlying hatred feel more grotesque. Dark, strange, and deeply unsettling work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a surreal piece, my friend! Corporate nostalgia mutates into occult extremism, and the absurdity only makes the underlying hatred feel more grotesque. Dark, strange, and deeply unsettling work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:21
Moonman, I Want to Write About Thee
sorenbarrett said:
Fable indeed in this poem of invention. It took a couple of readings to decide I knew little to nothing about the subject recognizing runes and kabbalah but little else. A fun read
July 17th, 2026 03:09
sorenbarrett said:
Fable indeed in this poem of invention. It took a couple of readings to decide I knew little to nothing about the subject recognizing runes and kabbalah but little else. A fun read
July 17th, 2026 03:09
Lick my balls
Tristan Robert Lange said:
well, well
if i must..
i don’t lick
but i’ll bust
those balls:
before all the fun stalls:
well, well
if i must.
Couldn\'t resist, my friend. 😅 Thanks for the laugh this morning. 🤣 A fave from me for making me smile.
July 11th, 2026 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
well, well
if i must..
i don’t lick
but i’ll bust
those balls:
before all the fun stalls:
well, well
if i must.
Couldn\'t resist, my friend. 😅 Thanks for the laugh this morning. 🤣 A fave from me for making me smile.
July 11th, 2026 07:56
Lick my balls
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a canine type of poem, maybe feline either will do. Interesting
July 11th, 2026 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a canine type of poem, maybe feline either will do. Interesting
July 11th, 2026 05:13
Word Girl (A Fanfic)
sorenbarrett said:
We often talk to ourselves and sometimes don\'t listen and at others don\'t understand. The corpus colosseum links the two sides but there are traffic jams at times and things stall out. Well written
July 9th, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
We often talk to ourselves and sometimes don\'t listen and at others don\'t understand. The corpus colosseum links the two sides but there are traffic jams at times and things stall out. Well written
July 9th, 2026 13:25
I need my med back
sorenbarrett said:
A great first person unwinding of a reliance on medication to see the world as others do. It shows an unraveling of common perspectives on events and to gain reunification with common beliefs and view medications are needed. This has deep philosophical and ethical implications.
May 31st, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A great first person unwinding of a reliance on medication to see the world as others do. It shows an unraveling of common perspectives on events and to gain reunification with common beliefs and view medications are needed. This has deep philosophical and ethical implications.
May 31st, 2026 03:52
I need my med back
never be said:
Urope would have beet hitler d-day or not... Hitler shouldn\'t hsve attacked russia in the mannor that he had.
May 30th, 2026 22:53
never be said:
Urope would have beet hitler d-day or not... Hitler shouldn\'t hsve attacked russia in the mannor that he had.
May 30th, 2026 22:53
I want to read again
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic confession stitched with desire and an appeal for a healing elixir. Very nicely written
May 27th, 2026 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic confession stitched with desire and an appeal for a healing elixir. Very nicely written
May 27th, 2026 20:25
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