colors
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME EMY - Great first poem - thanks for sharing ! The colors of LIFE and the colors of LOVE are the same - they just glow for different reasons. Your note is helpful telling me that your poem is an exaggerated melange of your feelings. I can empathise with a lot of the issues you mention ! As we move through life we hurt and are hurt and i love your closing line ! "I love you for the black and blue and the grey inside your eyes". An excellently crafted poem bursting with rhyme and rhythm . The content mirrors reality ! BRIAN

May 7th, 2016 16:09