Comments received on poems by pontefract



what I was told was not
sorenbarrett said:

Good write

July 2nd, 2026 18:54

how to remember
sorenbarrett said:

Most metaphoric this poem speaks to me of maintaining old ways. Well written

June 30th, 2026 04:10

appraisal
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful tribute and very nicely written in good rhyme and meter with a wonderful flow. Well done

June 24th, 2026 09:15

first snow
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful words of a frozen world where white covers all other colors. Nicely written

June 17th, 2026 10:54

kin-dread
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem of contraries and the unexpected. Clever and nicely written.

June 12th, 2026 09:18

the signature
NafisaSB said:

yes, we were not meant to be seamless, but i hope no one is scarred by these jagged lines - gives food for thought


June 8th, 2026 00:12

the signature
sorenbarrett said:

Brutally dark and graphic. Well written

June 6th, 2026 21:03

elemental fusion
sorenbarrett said:

Brave and a fun read

June 4th, 2026 21:36

cursor’s blink
sorenbarrett said:

This paints a vivid picture of technological progress that may or may not be for the better. Well written in good rhyme that helps with the flow.

June 2nd, 2026 05:07

what matters
sorenbarrett said:

A surreal view of life. Well written

May 24th, 2026 10:30