Comments received on poems by pontefract
cyclone gale
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal this poem speaks of beauty and life. Well done
September 14th, 2026 15:41
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal this poem speaks of beauty and life. Well done
September 14th, 2026 15:41
to the maker of rules
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever internal rhyme and good meter make this a strong write. Nicely done and a fave
September 13th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever internal rhyme and good meter make this a strong write. Nicely done and a fave
September 13th, 2026 04:24
Ricky, come home
FrasMac said:
Yes, I like the song and your use of it. Your inner rhymes carry the piece just like a song too.
September 12th, 2026 07:32
FrasMac said:
Yes, I like the song and your use of it. Your inner rhymes carry the piece just like a song too.
September 12th, 2026 07:32
Ricky, come home
sorenbarrett said:
A nice write about a change in mind and a holding on. Nicely done.
September 11th, 2026 20:09
sorenbarrett said:
A nice write about a change in mind and a holding on. Nicely done.
September 11th, 2026 20:09
don’t forget our number
sorenbarrett said:
Numerology in a poem of metaphor well done
September 10th, 2026 18:42
sorenbarrett said:
Numerology in a poem of metaphor well done
September 10th, 2026 18:42
on the cold hearth
sorenbarrett said:
Man never respected nature\'s form. Well written.
September 2nd, 2026 19:58
sorenbarrett said:
Man never respected nature\'s form. Well written.
September 2nd, 2026 19:58
The Pomfret Cake
sorenbarrett said:
And the question is what is this cake. At first I thought it was an old love buried under the walk. Nicely done
August 16th, 2026 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
And the question is what is this cake. At first I thought it was an old love buried under the walk. Nicely done
August 16th, 2026 07:51
night dip
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly poetic in its wording and images and deserves a fave
August 1st, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly poetic in its wording and images and deserves a fave
August 1st, 2026 09:39
widowed again
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording brings this poem to its point. Nicely done and a fave
July 30th, 2026 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording brings this poem to its point. Nicely done and a fave
July 30th, 2026 13:38
The Day They Carried
sorenbarrett said:
An invisible understanding fills this write and implied in the writing itself that is vague enough to be taken more than one way but obvious enough to understood be each in their own way. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
An invisible understanding fills this write and implied in the writing itself that is vague enough to be taken more than one way but obvious enough to understood be each in their own way. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 03:41
a pastry engineer’s lament
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and multi level. Nicely done
July 21st, 2026 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and multi level. Nicely done
July 21st, 2026 19:07
stylus on heart
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image painted here. It seems that beside iron gates cold weather locks people out. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image painted here. It seems that beside iron gates cold weather locks people out. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 15:02
another red calendar day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of stolen freedom and land that we celebrate as ours. Nicely done
July 14th, 2026 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of stolen freedom and land that we celebrate as ours. Nicely done
July 14th, 2026 09:07
counterweight
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is built upon stray objects forming a background of a place or person a collector of past and is nostalgic in this regard. It wears cobwebs. Nicely written
July 13th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is built upon stray objects forming a background of a place or person a collector of past and is nostalgic in this regard. It wears cobwebs. Nicely written
July 13th, 2026 04:29
stamped in clay
sorenbarrett said:
A comforting and most supportive poem a type of pledge of fidelity. Lovely
July 10th, 2026 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
A comforting and most supportive poem a type of pledge of fidelity. Lovely
July 10th, 2026 11:40
July
sorenbarrett said:
Pregnant with meaning this poem births metaphor after metaphor. I particularly like:
\"Let them burn their money in the clouds.
The stone stays where it fell.\"
This too may be taken various ways but if taken literally in terms of technology it fits todays society. Well done
July 10th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
Pregnant with meaning this poem births metaphor after metaphor. I particularly like:
\"Let them burn their money in the clouds.
The stone stays where it fell.\"
This too may be taken various ways but if taken literally in terms of technology it fits todays society. Well done
July 10th, 2026 03:47
open every door
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful wording and rhyme that sends a lovely message
July 7th, 2026 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful wording and rhyme that sends a lovely message
July 7th, 2026 09:06
fourth of never
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme tells a tale of a place of state uninhabited by political correctness or polite society. Well done
July 5th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme tells a tale of a place of state uninhabited by political correctness or polite society. Well done
July 5th, 2026 07:06
how to remember
sorenbarrett said:
Most metaphoric this poem speaks to me of maintaining old ways. Well written
June 30th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Most metaphoric this poem speaks to me of maintaining old ways. Well written
June 30th, 2026 04:10
appraisal
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute and very nicely written in good rhyme and meter with a wonderful flow. Well done
June 24th, 2026 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute and very nicely written in good rhyme and meter with a wonderful flow. Well done
June 24th, 2026 09:15
first snow
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of a frozen world where white covers all other colors. Nicely written
June 17th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of a frozen world where white covers all other colors. Nicely written
June 17th, 2026 10:54
kin-dread
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of contraries and the unexpected. Clever and nicely written.
June 12th, 2026 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of contraries and the unexpected. Clever and nicely written.
June 12th, 2026 09:18
the signature
NafisaSB said:
yes, we were not meant to be seamless, but i hope no one is scarred by these jagged lines - gives food for thought
June 8th, 2026 00:12
NafisaSB said:
yes, we were not meant to be seamless, but i hope no one is scarred by these jagged lines - gives food for thought
June 8th, 2026 00:12
cursor’s blink
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a vivid picture of technological progress that may or may not be for the better. Well written in good rhyme that helps with the flow.
June 2nd, 2026 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a vivid picture of technological progress that may or may not be for the better. Well written in good rhyme that helps with the flow.
June 2nd, 2026 05:07
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