Comments received on poems by pontefract



kin-dread
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem of contraries and the unexpected. Clever and nicely written.

June 12th, 2026 09:18

the signature
NafisaSB said:

yes, we were not meant to be seamless, but i hope no one is scarred by these jagged lines - gives food for thought


June 8th, 2026 00:12

the signature
sorenbarrett said:

Brutally dark and graphic. Well written

June 6th, 2026 21:03

elemental fusion
sorenbarrett said:

Brave and a fun read

June 4th, 2026 21:36

cursor’s blink
sorenbarrett said:

This paints a vivid picture of technological progress that may or may not be for the better. Well written in good rhyme that helps with the flow.

June 2nd, 2026 05:07

what matters
sorenbarrett said:

A surreal view of life. Well written

May 24th, 2026 10:30