Comments received on poems by Cerise456



Once
Alex Arnot said:

And when they notice, they try to clip them! Great write!

May 18th, 2026 13:44

Once
sorenbarrett said:

A short but most metaphoric write of independence. Well done

May 18th, 2026 13:43

Rain
sorenbarrett said:

Short but meaningful and well written. Nicely done

May 11th, 2026 22:04

Rain
Janey_Boo said:

This is so beautiful!

May 11th, 2026 13:15

Rain
Fränz Müller said:

Lovely!

May 11th, 2026 12:33

Still waiting
sorenbarrett said:

Different thoughts for different people and timing is an issue where things do not always occur as they should. Well done

May 10th, 2026 19:15

A beauty in disguise
sorenbarrett said:

People pleasing can cause one trouble and I hear it in this poem

May 5th, 2026 19:52

A beauty in disguise
Salvia.S said:

No one\'s born to be a slave in someone else\'s life. Thank you for saying it.

May 5th, 2026 12:44

A beauty in disguise
Poetic Dan said:

We are the wish to be wished upon. No slave unless it\'s what you want.

May 5th, 2026 09:58

I don\'t know
arqios said:

Indeed, life should be lived so our leaving is unregretted and remorseless. 🕊️🙏

May 4th, 2026 18:15

I don\'t know
sorenbarrett said:

Agreed no one should leave with remorse of regret carpe diam is the phrase.

May 4th, 2026 15:58

Smart
sorenbarrett said:

A great question that has many answers. To society it the one that finishes first and has the most money, to the religious the one that does what they think is right. to the school the one with the highest grades, to the lover the one that keeps his love and to me the one that learns how to be happy. Well done

May 1st, 2026 16:41

Smart
Katie B. said:

Clever. Good question.


May 1st, 2026 13:29

Pain
sorenbarrett said:

Things that are hard to talk about when they are being confronted nicely done

April 28th, 2026 14:45

Pain
Katie B. said:

Great piece!

April 28th, 2026 13:49