Comments received on poems by Aashi M.
Steam
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem uses metaphor well in its description and uses images well. Nicely done
August 1st, 2026 16:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem uses metaphor well in its description and uses images well. Nicely done
August 1st, 2026 16:52
The Sky is Always Dour Before it Rains
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems metaphoric. Dower indeed. Good write
July 28th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems metaphoric. Dower indeed. Good write
July 28th, 2026 11:20
I Am
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the very feel of teaching in it. That seed seems the seed of wisdom that we feed to others. The had ours extended in help to those in need, we need those eyes to see those that are in need and then extend the hand being the person who gives meaning to life. To me this then becomes a god within oneself one of creation an I am that I am. A fave
July 6th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the very feel of teaching in it. That seed seems the seed of wisdom that we feed to others. The had ours extended in help to those in need, we need those eyes to see those that are in need and then extend the hand being the person who gives meaning to life. To me this then becomes a god within oneself one of creation an I am that I am. A fave
July 6th, 2026 06:39
If I Could
sorenbarrett said:
Love and empathy fill this poem nicely composed with compassion that reverts to seeing oneself in the same mirror. Well written
June 24th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Love and empathy fill this poem nicely composed with compassion that reverts to seeing oneself in the same mirror. Well written
June 24th, 2026 04:10
