Comments received on poems by syeda



The Thundering Outside
sorenbarrett said:

Interesting juxtaposition of silent with loud and nicely imaged. Well done

August 1st, 2026 06:44

The Thundering Outside
Poetic Dan said:

Your first post and what an opening lie! My first thought was the only silence I know is the one I don\'t get to feel as sleep is like a blink that sometimes I wish I could feel. Very deep and beautifully written! Thank you for sharing. Much peace and respect 🙏 🫡

August 1st, 2026 06:09

The Thundering Outside
Paul Bell said:

The message comes through clearly.
Sometimes what isn\'t good for us actually keeps us going.

August 1st, 2026 05:58