Comments received on poems by Hillary Monica Maranresy
Path of Faith
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge and an offer of becoming more by accepting. Nicely written
July 25th, 2026 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge and an offer of becoming more by accepting. Nicely written
July 25th, 2026 09:23
The Rollercoster of The Play
sorenbarrett said:
Anacronyms the crutch of the lazy give the feeling of modernization in this metaphoric poem that speaks to those following the trend. Nicely worded
July 24th, 2026 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Anacronyms the crutch of the lazy give the feeling of modernization in this metaphoric poem that speaks to those following the trend. Nicely worded
July 24th, 2026 06:07
Lost in Sight of Frequency
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins as life itself and ends as the surreal and theoretical and metaphysical. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins as life itself and ends as the surreal and theoretical and metaphysical. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 12:57
Learn From Ants
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write and analogy. Ants amazing creatures devoted to the nest they sacrifice all for its good and don\'t seem to know the word tired. Yet they seem to know the limits of what is possible and take on tasks to us that seem impossible. The do not stop until the task is done. Nicely written
July 21st, 2026 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write and analogy. Ants amazing creatures devoted to the nest they sacrifice all for its good and don\'t seem to know the word tired. Yet they seem to know the limits of what is possible and take on tasks to us that seem impossible. The do not stop until the task is done. Nicely written
July 21st, 2026 10:27
to Monday
Paul Bell said:
Monday\'s should come with a health warning, maybe Tuesday too, Wednesday is inbetween life and death, Thursday is just bearable.
Friday, is release day, the sun is shining, people look sane, and the bar has a drink with my name etched on it.
July 20th, 2026 11:12
Paul Bell said:
Monday\'s should come with a health warning, maybe Tuesday too, Wednesday is inbetween life and death, Thursday is just bearable.
Friday, is release day, the sun is shining, people look sane, and the bar has a drink with my name etched on it.
July 20th, 2026 11:12
to Monday
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is like a pause in time. Nicely written it speaks to the unknowable future
July 20th, 2026 10:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is like a pause in time. Nicely written it speaks to the unknowable future
July 20th, 2026 10:24
One Fall Cannot Stop A Person
sorenbarrett said:
Starting from now a new history is created. Nicely done this poem is a positive outlook.
July 17th, 2026 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
Starting from now a new history is created. Nicely done this poem is a positive outlook.
July 17th, 2026 11:06
A Risk of Love
Paul Bell said:
They do say the forbidden fruit tastes better.
Though too much fruit is bad for you as the bag of apples fell on my foot.
July 16th, 2026 08:17
Paul Bell said:
They do say the forbidden fruit tastes better.
Though too much fruit is bad for you as the bag of apples fell on my foot.
July 16th, 2026 08:17
Cowboy Nowadays
sorenbarrett said:
I always have loved narrative poetry from Homer\'s Odyssey to Robert Service\'s Tales of the Yukon and the Cremation of Sam McGee this is a poem of a storyteller nicely done.
July 16th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
I always have loved narrative poetry from Homer\'s Odyssey to Robert Service\'s Tales of the Yukon and the Cremation of Sam McGee this is a poem of a storyteller nicely done.
July 16th, 2026 08:17
Broken Pieces
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point nicely worded. A great write Hillary
July 15th, 2026 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point nicely worded. A great write Hillary
July 15th, 2026 06:36
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RSM0812 said:
Interesting write about love and the toxic of technology. I liked how it didnt rhyme but made the story told in a short stanza.
July 14th, 2026 11:11
RSM0812 said:
Interesting write about love and the toxic of technology. I liked how it didnt rhyme but made the story told in a short stanza.
July 14th, 2026 11:11
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sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poetic expression about a recognition. Nicely done
July 14th, 2026 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poetic expression about a recognition. Nicely done
July 14th, 2026 07:58
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Thomas W Case said:
A clever metaphor—your heart as overloaded storage makes the feeling of overwhelm instantly relatable.
Witty and gentle, it turns something technical into something deeply human without losing its warmth.
July 14th, 2026 07:12
Thomas W Case said:
A clever metaphor—your heart as overloaded storage makes the feeling of overwhelm instantly relatable.
Witty and gentle, it turns something technical into something deeply human without losing its warmth.
July 14th, 2026 07:12
Our Unforgettable Motherland
Lorenz said:
all these volcanic sites are as deadly as they are fascinating ...Vulcanoes are one of my favorite poetic topics.
July 13th, 2026 09:37
Lorenz said:
all these volcanic sites are as deadly as they are fascinating ...Vulcanoes are one of my favorite poetic topics.
July 13th, 2026 09:37
Our Unforgettable Motherland
sorenbarrett said:
Proud and nationalistic it uses color as symbolism of its virtues. Well written
July 13th, 2026 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
Proud and nationalistic it uses color as symbolism of its virtues. Well written
July 13th, 2026 07:19
Morning Brain Chemistry
sorenbarrett said:
The mundane becomes drudgery and the lethargic. Another day.
Well written
July 12th, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
The mundane becomes drudgery and the lethargic. Another day.
Well written
July 12th, 2026 09:30
Morning Brain Chemistry
rhmn_7 said:
Chaotic reality of a forced early awakening with the aspirational appeal of the 5 A.M. club. Nice poem dear Hillary!
July 12th, 2026 07:50
rhmn_7 said:
Chaotic reality of a forced early awakening with the aspirational appeal of the 5 A.M. club. Nice poem dear Hillary!
July 12th, 2026 07:50
Loop Road
sorenbarrett said:
Around and around ending where we began an nightmare, a metaphor of life\'s cycle or the real life treadmill. Nice
July 11th, 2026 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
Around and around ending where we began an nightmare, a metaphor of life\'s cycle or the real life treadmill. Nice
July 11th, 2026 10:46
The Why
Paul Bell said:
I maybe wrong, but I think some guy has upset you.
The love game is always cruel, hits you on the blind and usually keeps you there.
July 10th, 2026 11:48
Paul Bell said:
I maybe wrong, but I think some guy has upset you.
The love game is always cruel, hits you on the blind and usually keeps you there.
July 10th, 2026 11:48
The little girl, The Writer
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written piece
July 10th, 2026 06:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written piece
July 10th, 2026 06:43
A Risk of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Love is not an easy task it is passion that is easy and burns bright, love is a slow steady glow that lasts. A lovely write
July 8th, 2026 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Love is not an easy task it is passion that is easy and burns bright, love is a slow steady glow that lasts. A lovely write
July 8th, 2026 08:58
Drama in Puzzle
sorenbarrett said:
There is a silent independence in this relationship where other\'s rights are respected and self desires and paramount. Nicely done
July 4th, 2026 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
There is a silent independence in this relationship where other\'s rights are respected and self desires and paramount. Nicely done
July 4th, 2026 07:14
Dreamy Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
The story bears similarities to Alice through the looking glass. Well written
July 2nd, 2026 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
The story bears similarities to Alice through the looking glass. Well written
July 2nd, 2026 10:10
A Stolen Sheep and his good Shepherd
Paul Bell said:
In reality, you are your own shepherd.
Life will give you mostly good with a bit of bad thrown in to test your mettle.
This is where your sixth sense hopefully helps.
June 30th, 2026 11:28
Paul Bell said:
In reality, you are your own shepherd.
Life will give you mostly good with a bit of bad thrown in to test your mettle.
This is where your sixth sense hopefully helps.
June 30th, 2026 11:28
A Stolen Sheep and his good Shepherd
sorenbarrett said:
This feels biblical a Christ sermon of the good shepherd. Well done
June 30th, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
This feels biblical a Christ sermon of the good shepherd. Well done
June 30th, 2026 08:45
A Father, A Leader
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poetic tribute in this piece. Well done
June 29th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poetic tribute in this piece. Well done
June 29th, 2026 06:48
