Comments received on poems by Shahrukh
The race
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed a race that seems like it starts off slow and picks up speed as it goes along. Well done
August 14th, 2026 20:09
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed a race that seems like it starts off slow and picks up speed as it goes along. Well done
August 14th, 2026 20:09
I’m lost
sorenbarrett said:
Forgetting oneself is not a good thing to do. Well written
July 17th, 2026 19:06
sorenbarrett said:
Forgetting oneself is not a good thing to do. Well written
July 17th, 2026 19:06
Twenty seven
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
im 18 and i feel like this too at times ,ig its because of those standards we keep on changing ,and then we say we never achieved anything,one cant achieve forever changing finish line sharukh ,fate is written in a way that gives us blanks that we have to fill ourselves , \"in order to leap forward we have to lose something first\" i dont know where i heared it though
July 8th, 2026 06:09
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
im 18 and i feel like this too at times ,ig its because of those standards we keep on changing ,and then we say we never achieved anything,one cant achieve forever changing finish line sharukh ,fate is written in a way that gives us blanks that we have to fill ourselves , \"in order to leap forward we have to lose something first\" i dont know where i heared it though
July 8th, 2026 06:09
TIME BOUND
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
our past is what makes us what we are yet being so indulged in it that we stop seeing the present ,is what often leads to faliure
July 8th, 2026 06:06
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
our past is what makes us what we are yet being so indulged in it that we stop seeing the present ,is what often leads to faliure
July 8th, 2026 06:06
Break the bubble
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
literally love this line
\"Perhaps courage is simply acting before the mind agrees\"
July 8th, 2026 06:04
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
literally love this line
\"Perhaps courage is simply acting before the mind agrees\"
July 8th, 2026 06:04
Life plays chess
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
ive never really played chess but i do can say that for each decision we make by ourselves there is a price ,whether its loss of a loved one,hatred from whom we wanted support ,loneliness or betrayal
July 8th, 2026 06:02
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
ive never really played chess but i do can say that for each decision we make by ourselves there is a price ,whether its loss of a loved one,hatred from whom we wanted support ,loneliness or betrayal
July 8th, 2026 06:02
WORDS
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
im not sure where i read it maybe its a wuote from imam ALI (R.A) that whatever a person hides in heart its gets shown by their eyes,eyes are mirror of soul
July 8th, 2026 06:00
NAZIA ZAHRA said:
im not sure where i read it maybe its a wuote from imam ALI (R.A) that whatever a person hides in heart its gets shown by their eyes,eyes are mirror of soul
July 8th, 2026 06:00
Search
sorenbarrett said:
Look withing and be grateful for what one has. Lovely
June 24th, 2026 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Look withing and be grateful for what one has. Lovely
June 24th, 2026 05:42
Twenty seven
sorenbarrett said:
The message is a good one. They say it is hard to hit a moving target and if survival is the aim then this is the method. Maybe it isn\'t the destination but the journey that is important and being a jack of all trades and master of none is better. Nicely written this poem takes us to a meaning where it is what we learn along the way that is important not where we get to. Lovely
June 21st, 2026 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
The message is a good one. They say it is hard to hit a moving target and if survival is the aim then this is the method. Maybe it isn\'t the destination but the journey that is important and being a jack of all trades and master of none is better. Nicely written this poem takes us to a meaning where it is what we learn along the way that is important not where we get to. Lovely
June 21st, 2026 05:56
Life plays chess
Syd said:
There\'s a lot of truth in this write. Well written 👏
- Syd
June 19th, 2026 11:42
Syd said:
There\'s a lot of truth in this write. Well written 👏
- Syd
June 19th, 2026 11:42
Life plays chess
Lorenz said:
It is the game of chess that enjoys inventing lives for its pieces...
June 19th, 2026 08:46
Lorenz said:
It is the game of chess that enjoys inventing lives for its pieces...
June 19th, 2026 08:46
Life plays chess
sorenbarrett said:
Chess is a game close to life in many ways and you have depicted one very well. Nicely written
June 19th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Chess is a game close to life in many ways and you have depicted one very well. Nicely written
June 19th, 2026 04:40
TIME BOUND
sorenbarrett said:
It feels real but they say that there is no past or future only present. I sense the feeling of pressure and frustration.
June 18th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
It feels real but they say that there is no past or future only present. I sense the feeling of pressure and frustration.
June 18th, 2026 04:29
WORDS
sorenbarrett said:
How often we can not express what we see or feel and how often we wish another could see things as we do. Well written
June 17th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
How often we can not express what we see or feel and how often we wish another could see things as we do. Well written
June 17th, 2026 04:23
