Comments received on poems by GothAngel
The secret dance
Paul Bell said:
The pleasure of pleasure in the pleasure zone.
Millions of women worldwide will be shouting in one voice with. \'\' No men were harmed in this pleasure.\'\'
July 24th, 2026 05:34
Paul Bell said:
The pleasure of pleasure in the pleasure zone.
Millions of women worldwide will be shouting in one voice with. \'\' No men were harmed in this pleasure.\'\'
July 24th, 2026 05:34
The secret dance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written, GothAngel! The gradual intensification gives this a natural, hypnotic momentum that draws the reader deeper with every line. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 22nd, 2026 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written, GothAngel! The gradual intensification gives this a natural, hypnotic momentum that draws the reader deeper with every line. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 22nd, 2026 07:59
The protection of the rejection
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ouch, GothAngel! This captures that painful collision between desire and restraint, where waiting becomes its own exquisite torment. Emotionally charged work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 22nd, 2026 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ouch, GothAngel! This captures that painful collision between desire and restraint, where waiting becomes its own exquisite torment. Emotionally charged work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 22nd, 2026 07:58
Touching My Unbroken Forest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sensational write, GothAngel! The mounting momentum is incredibly effective, steadily intensifying until the entire piece feels almost uncontrollable. Brilliantly executed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 22nd, 2026 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sensational write, GothAngel! The mounting momentum is incredibly effective, steadily intensifying until the entire piece feels almost uncontrollable. Brilliantly executed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 22nd, 2026 07:57
Eyes of the guider
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is intensely sensual and psychologically charged. The restraint makes everything more potent...he never crosses the room, yet his presence controls everything occurring within it. Provocative and brilliantly executed. Welcome to MPS! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 22nd, 2026 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is intensely sensual and psychologically charged. The restraint makes everything more potent...he never crosses the room, yet his presence controls everything occurring within it. Provocative and brilliantly executed. Welcome to MPS! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 22nd, 2026 07:55
Eyes of the guider
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
slow steps to the secret dance, the thought could be more sensual than the reality, well written
July 21st, 2026 12:13
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
slow steps to the secret dance, the thought could be more sensual than the reality, well written
July 21st, 2026 12:13
Eyes of the guider
Paul Bell said:
Does the performance get better if the eyes approve.
Does giving direction from afar more satisfying than actually being touched.
In a way, both are in control, and maybe both get the ultimate frill.
July 21st, 2026 09:52
Paul Bell said:
Does the performance get better if the eyes approve.
Does giving direction from afar more satisfying than actually being touched.
In a way, both are in control, and maybe both get the ultimate frill.
July 21st, 2026 09:52
Eyes of the guider
sorenbarrett said:
Voyeuristic, seductive and sensual this write shows good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 21st, 2026 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Voyeuristic, seductive and sensual this write shows good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 21st, 2026 08:18
The protection of the rejection
Paul Bell said:
Tingly, slippery slides, should be the byword for a nicer rejaction.
Well, that is, once the tangling begins of course.
Cos after all, rejection might just be a swinging door.
July 21st, 2026 06:30
Paul Bell said:
Tingly, slippery slides, should be the byword for a nicer rejaction.
Well, that is, once the tangling begins of course.
Cos after all, rejection might just be a swinging door.
July 21st, 2026 06:30
Touching My Unbroken Forest
Paul Bell said:
When you go into the woods today you\'re in for a big surprise.
There\'s a GothAngel discovering her inner thighs.
Don\'t disturb, please don\'t pry.
What goes on in the forest will wet your eyes.
July 20th, 2026 11:30
Paul Bell said:
When you go into the woods today you\'re in for a big surprise.
There\'s a GothAngel discovering her inner thighs.
Don\'t disturb, please don\'t pry.
What goes on in the forest will wet your eyes.
July 20th, 2026 11:30
Touching My Unbroken Forest
peto said:
Great write bit of self exploration
Cant wait for what happens. next
July 20th, 2026 10:31
peto said:
Great write bit of self exploration
Cant wait for what happens. next
July 20th, 2026 10:31
Touching My Unbroken Forest
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
sensuality in each line
July 20th, 2026 05:31
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
sensuality in each line
July 20th, 2026 05:31
Touching My Unbroken Forest
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric, sensual, sexual it sends its message of passion and pleasure in natural terms. Well done
July 20th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric, sensual, sexual it sends its message of passion and pleasure in natural terms. Well done
July 20th, 2026 04:17
The protection of the rejection
peto said:
Nicely done Angel
Brilliant last line
July 19th, 2026 18:36
peto said:
Nicely done Angel
Brilliant last line
July 19th, 2026 18:36
The secret dance
jim56 said:
you have a talent for writing
and express your poem so well
with good use of words
it reaches out well done
keep writing you have the talent
good luck Jim
July 19th, 2026 15:04
jim56 said:
you have a talent for writing
and express your poem so well
with good use of words
it reaches out well done
keep writing you have the talent
good luck Jim
July 19th, 2026 15:04
The secret dance
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the solo dance, well expressed
July 19th, 2026 13:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the solo dance, well expressed
July 19th, 2026 13:21
The protection of the rejection
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write , sensuality tingles throughout
July 19th, 2026 08:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write , sensuality tingles throughout
July 19th, 2026 08:41
The protection of the rejection
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of fantasy denied it is sensual and a tease that is not taken. Well written
July 19th, 2026 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of fantasy denied it is sensual and a tease that is not taken. Well written
July 19th, 2026 07:22
The secret dance
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual and one might interpret sexual a dance of self romance. Well done
July 18th, 2026 15:00
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual and one might interpret sexual a dance of self romance. Well done
July 18th, 2026 15:00
The secret dance
Ogunisjustice said:
This sounds sexy woman 👠
Great expression of pleasured self experience
July 18th, 2026 14:16
Ogunisjustice said:
This sounds sexy woman 👠
Great expression of pleasured self experience
July 18th, 2026 14:16
