Comments received on poems by Muhammad Ashraful Alam



Satisfied mind
Paul Bell said:

That\'s the problem with humans, they spend so much time running around headless, not realising all around them and below, nature is calmly going about her business.
If only we took time to be silent, look and listen.

July 25th, 2026 10:26

Satisfied mind
sorenbarrett said:

Tropical and beach like it becomes almost surreal in atmosphere. Nicely imaged

July 25th, 2026 09:25

A teenage girl\'s distress
sorenbarrett said:

This poem emphasizes the poverty and suffering given on a cast of nature\'s dice. Powerful and sad with little hope.

July 24th, 2026 04:10

Indweller
sorenbarrett said:

Nature and man in this poem of the gods. Are we not all the same? Well written with good images of sight, smell, sound, taste and smell. Lovely

July 22nd, 2026 08:49

Distance
sorenbarrett said:

Romantic and well set with images this poem sets a mood. Nicely done

July 20th, 2026 04:26

Dream
Muhammad Ashraful Alam said:

Thank you.

July 19th, 2026 10:11

Dream
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write, welcome to MPS

July 19th, 2026 08:38

Dream
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful a poem filled with dream images some frightening others majestic while others still touch the soul. Nicely written

July 19th, 2026 07:33