Comments received on poems by Butter
:3 saddle’s don’t go rattle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, I have a soft spot for poems that let language misbehave simply because it can. This twists the tongue, scrambles expectation, and enjoys every second of it. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 15:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, I have a soft spot for poems that let language misbehave simply because it can. This twists the tongue, scrambles expectation, and enjoys every second of it. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 15:08
:3 saddle’s don’t go rattle
sorenbarrett said:
Payback in a poem. Nicely done
September 15th, 2026 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
Payback in a poem. Nicely done
September 15th, 2026 18:19
I can’t write now
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries such a vulnerable uncertainty. Creativity wants to emerge, but fear keeps interrupting before it can fully find its voice. Nicely captured, Butter! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2026 23:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries such a vulnerable uncertainty. Creativity wants to emerge, but fear keeps interrupting before it can fully find its voice. Nicely captured, Butter! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2026 23:23
In way to good for this bro
sorenbarrett said:
Like the Jabberwocky of Lewis Carroll it speaks in words unknown. Well done
September 11th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Like the Jabberwocky of Lewis Carroll it speaks in words unknown. Well done
September 11th, 2026 04:37
I don’t know what to do with myself anymore
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful piece, Butter! The repeated questioning feels relentless...like thought and pain trapped in the same tightening circle. I’ve known moments like this, and you captured that exhaustion with painful honesty. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful piece, Butter! The repeated questioning feels relentless...like thought and pain trapped in the same tightening circle. I’ve known moments like this, and you captured that exhaustion with painful honesty. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:46
I don’t know what to do with myself anymore
sorenbarrett said:
The soul goes where the mind orders. A great write that had my eyes wandering all over the page.
September 8th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
The soul goes where the mind orders. A great write that had my eyes wandering all over the page.
September 8th, 2026 03:58
This isn’t a poem (NOT 15)
Norman Flagtea said:
Tiny voices.
But I must confess that the internet helped...
September 7th, 2026 15:33
Norman Flagtea said:
Tiny voices.
But I must confess that the internet helped...
September 7th, 2026 15:33
This isn’t a poem (NOT 15)
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting that we both wrote on music and artists today. I would guess Nat King Cole \"orange colored sky\"
September 6th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting that we both wrote on music and artists today. I would guess Nat King Cole \"orange colored sky\"
September 6th, 2026 04:58
Just a quick glance over
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this has a fun little cosmic curiosity to it. I like the way the whole thing feels almost casual, like stumbling across a planet and deciding it might be worth a closer look after all. Nice piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this has a fun little cosmic curiosity to it. I like the way the whole thing feels almost casual, like stumbling across a planet and deciding it might be worth a closer look after all. Nice piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:33
Just a quick glance over
sorenbarrett said:
Such an insignificant spot in a wide universe why would anyone be interested even if they did notice it. Nicely done
September 1st, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Such an insignificant spot in a wide universe why would anyone be interested even if they did notice it. Nicely done
September 1st, 2026 03:36
Decision decisions
sorenbarrett said:
I was fascinated with the format of this poem where left is aggressive, center middle ground and right is passive. It tells its story well. Nicely done Butter
August 31st, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
I was fascinated with the format of this poem where left is aggressive, center middle ground and right is passive. It tells its story well. Nicely done Butter
August 31st, 2026 04:15
Fosh
boot said:
Haha..love it...and yeah..fish aren\'t noted for their intelligence...but who\'s to say
August 24th, 2026 00:58
boot said:
Haha..love it...and yeah..fish aren\'t noted for their intelligence...but who\'s to say
August 24th, 2026 00:58
Fosh
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this is wonderfully strange and playful. You’ve created a lovable little disaster who continually gets in his own way...and somehow I’m still rooting for him. Enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this is wonderfully strange and playful. You’ve created a lovable little disaster who continually gets in his own way...and somehow I’m still rooting for him. Enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:01
Fosh
sorenbarrett said:
If logs were hogs (that is barrels or hog heads) I would understand. A fun read my friend
August 22nd, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
If logs were hogs (that is barrels or hog heads) I would understand. A fun read my friend
August 22nd, 2026 04:01
Death is a fragile condition
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of the movie the sixth sense. Nicely written Butter it speaks of spirits and their awareness. The rhyme scheme did not detract but seemed to work.
August 21st, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of the movie the sixth sense. Nicely written Butter it speaks of spirits and their awareness. The rhyme scheme did not detract but seemed to work.
August 21st, 2026 04:08
Beneath the wake.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Butter. The sea becomes an endless unknown where death, disappearance, and forgotten identity merge together...and the inclusion of celestial travelers makes that terror feel universal. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Butter. The sea becomes an endless unknown where death, disappearance, and forgotten identity merge together...and the inclusion of celestial travelers makes that terror feel universal. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:41
Beneath the wake.
Butter said:
Also this is day ten not eight. I was like not :3
August 20th, 2026 03:32
Butter said:
Also this is day ten not eight. I was like not :3
August 20th, 2026 03:32
Beneath the wake.
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reflects images on water. It is interesting that the question of being recalled, searched for is pertinent in that on water one leaves no tracks water closes in behind you leaving no trace to be remembered. Well written
August 20th, 2026 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reflects images on water. It is interesting that the question of being recalled, searched for is pertinent in that on water one leaves no tracks water closes in behind you leaving no trace to be remembered. Well written
August 20th, 2026 03:27
Driver of judgment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this is brief but wonderfully contemplative...a thoughtful meditation on freedom, time, and clarity. Nicely penned, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this is brief but wonderfully contemplative...a thoughtful meditation on freedom, time, and clarity. Nicely penned, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:33
Driver of judgment
sorenbarrett said:
Is the offset line the freedom or the break? Is it the crowd that is insane or the man they label mad. Well written Butter
August 18th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Is the offset line the freedom or the break? Is it the crowd that is insane or the man they label mad. Well written Butter
August 18th, 2026 04:35
Entropy
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing random in Newtonian physics or under laws of synchrony as proposed by Carl Jung, neither in magic\'s paradigm written in Alister Crowley\'s Migick in Theory and Practice. Only in Quantum Theory is random considered. Nicely written
August 16th, 2026 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing random in Newtonian physics or under laws of synchrony as proposed by Carl Jung, neither in magic\'s paradigm written in Alister Crowley\'s Migick in Theory and Practice. Only in Quantum Theory is random considered. Nicely written
August 16th, 2026 07:36
Entropy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this has a wonderfully unsettled energy to it. The weather, the motion, the pressure...everything feels chaotic, but the poem keeps asking whether that chaos is really as random as it appears. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this has a wonderfully unsettled energy to it. The weather, the motion, the pressure...everything feels chaotic, but the poem keeps asking whether that chaos is really as random as it appears. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:37
What makes us?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Butter...this is thoughtful, hopeful, and visually creative. I especially love the formatting...the movement across the page gives each thought room to stand on its own while still belonging to the whole. Really enjoyed this, my friend....and yes, love the challenge and the results! Keep it going!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Butter...this is thoughtful, hopeful, and visually creative. I especially love the formatting...the movement across the page gives each thought room to stand on its own while still belonging to the whole. Really enjoyed this, my friend....and yes, love the challenge and the results! Keep it going!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:12
What makes us?
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely positive view of the race. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely positive view of the race. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 03:51
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