Comments received on poems by Butter



Lost?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A fine poem, muse expessed swell wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

October 10th, 2026 16:14

Lost?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Butter, I can be pretty hard on myself. This makes me want to give myself a little more of a chance. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 9th, 2026 11:46

Driver of judgment
vicecream said:

This one got my wheels turning.. I think I have been being the reasonable man referenced here.. inspiring

October 9th, 2026 10:33

Lost?
sorenbarrett said:

One always has oneself and in so doing one can never be lost. Lovely Butter

October 9th, 2026 05:19

Lost?
Butter said:

24, mb :3

October 9th, 2026 05:14

Melting
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Butter, this is disturbing as hell. That detached observer at the center made it even more unsettling for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 5th, 2026 00:17

Melting
sorenbarrett said:

Creation in inspiration. Well done

October 4th, 2026 17:34

Know the things that must be answered.
2781 said:

That definitely does sound like bad religion.

October 3rd, 2026 08:35

Know the things that must be answered.
Sanjana Harnandan said:

oml this is so good keep going

September 29th, 2026 20:33

Know the things that must be answered.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Butter, this is twisted in a way I mean as a compliment. Love, guilt, faith, and horror all sitting at the same table…yeah, this one lingered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 29th, 2026 20:25

Know the things that must be answered.
sorenbarrett said:

Love blinds and gives power. Nicely written

September 29th, 2026 19:52

A flame that drifts in the hollow tides.
sorenbarrett said:

Reading this I think of those hot vents at the bottom of the trench that gives life to different forms of creatures. Nicely written it speaks as well in metaphor to all of life that came from the sea. I think you meant dear rather than deer but I could be off on this as well.

September 27th, 2026 18:54

A flame that drifts in the hollow tides.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Butter, there’s something eerie moving through this...fire, sea, old belief, strange creatures. It left me curious. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 27th, 2026 16:08

Salt water sees
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Butter, there’s a sadness here I know well. Sometimes all you can do is hold on while knowing damn well you can’t make a moment stay. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 19th, 2026 14:27

Salt water sees
Friendship said:

Nicely done

September 19th, 2026 08:34

Salt water sees
Durdica Porobija said:

A beautiful thoughtful poem in a pictorial dress.

September 19th, 2026 06:30

Salt water sees
sorenbarrett said:

Now that is a word that I have not encountered in poetry but describes well the color of the sea under bright sun. Well written

September 19th, 2026 04:27

Tide rise in the blood sea
Paul Bell said:

I\'m thinking your looking for inspiration through the depths here.

September 18th, 2026 10:00

Tide rise in the blood sea
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well, Butter...that was a quick trip into some very dark water. My kinda poem, naturally! 😏 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 18th, 2026 09:46

Tide rise in the blood sea
sorenbarrett said:

It has a sanguine feel somehow but I can not put my finger on its pulse. It bleeds words without revelation of the wound. Internal bleeding possibly. Nice

September 18th, 2026 04:34

:3 saddle’s don’t go rattle
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Butter, I have a soft spot for poems that let language misbehave simply because it can. This twists the tongue, scrambles expectation, and enjoys every second of it. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 16th, 2026 15:08

:3 saddle’s don’t go rattle
Friendship said:

nice work

September 16th, 2026 08:45

:3 saddle’s don’t go rattle
sorenbarrett said:

Payback in a poem. Nicely done

September 15th, 2026 18:19

I can’t write now
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this carries such a vulnerable uncertainty. Creativity wants to emerge, but fear keeps interrupting before it can fully find its voice. Nicely captured, Butter! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 12th, 2026 23:23

I can’t write now
sorenbarrett said:

Interesting thought. Well done.

September 12th, 2026 19:48

In way to good for this bro
sorenbarrett said:

Like the Jabberwocky of Lewis Carroll it speaks in words unknown. Well done

September 11th, 2026 04:37

I don’t know what to do with myself anymore
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Powerful piece, Butter! The repeated questioning feels relentless...like thought and pain trapped in the same tightening circle. I’ve known moments like this, and you captured that exhaustion with painful honesty. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 8th, 2026 08:46

I don’t know what to do with myself anymore
sorenbarrett said:

The soul goes where the mind orders. A great write that had my eyes wandering all over the page.

September 8th, 2026 03:58

This isn’t a poem (NOT 15)
Norman Flagtea said:

Tiny voices.
But I must confess that the internet helped...

September 7th, 2026 15:33

This isn’t a poem (NOT 15)
Norman Flagtea said:

Bad Religion ?

September 7th, 2026 07:38

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