Comments received on poems by Butter
Fosh
boot said:
Haha..love it...and yeah..fish aren\'t noted for their intelligence...but who\'s to say
August 24th, 2026 00:58
boot said:
Haha..love it...and yeah..fish aren\'t noted for their intelligence...but who\'s to say
August 24th, 2026 00:58
Fosh
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this is wonderfully strange and playful. You’ve created a lovable little disaster who continually gets in his own way...and somehow I’m still rooting for him. Enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this is wonderfully strange and playful. You’ve created a lovable little disaster who continually gets in his own way...and somehow I’m still rooting for him. Enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:01
Fosh
sorenbarrett said:
If logs were hogs (that is barrels or hog heads) I would understand. A fun read my friend
August 22nd, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
If logs were hogs (that is barrels or hog heads) I would understand. A fun read my friend
August 22nd, 2026 04:01
Death is a fragile condition
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of the movie the sixth sense. Nicely written Butter it speaks of spirits and their awareness. The rhyme scheme did not detract but seemed to work.
August 21st, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of the movie the sixth sense. Nicely written Butter it speaks of spirits and their awareness. The rhyme scheme did not detract but seemed to work.
August 21st, 2026 04:08
Beneath the wake.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Butter. The sea becomes an endless unknown where death, disappearance, and forgotten identity merge together...and the inclusion of celestial travelers makes that terror feel universal. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Butter. The sea becomes an endless unknown where death, disappearance, and forgotten identity merge together...and the inclusion of celestial travelers makes that terror feel universal. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:41
Beneath the wake.
Butter said:
Also this is day ten not eight. I was like not :3
August 20th, 2026 03:32
Butter said:
Also this is day ten not eight. I was like not :3
August 20th, 2026 03:32
Beneath the wake.
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reflects images on water. It is interesting that the question of being recalled, searched for is pertinent in that on water one leaves no tracks water closes in behind you leaving no trace to be remembered. Well written
August 20th, 2026 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reflects images on water. It is interesting that the question of being recalled, searched for is pertinent in that on water one leaves no tracks water closes in behind you leaving no trace to be remembered. Well written
August 20th, 2026 03:27
Driver of judgment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this is brief but wonderfully contemplative...a thoughtful meditation on freedom, time, and clarity. Nicely penned, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this is brief but wonderfully contemplative...a thoughtful meditation on freedom, time, and clarity. Nicely penned, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:33
Driver of judgment
sorenbarrett said:
Is the offset line the freedom or the break? Is it the crowd that is insane or the man they label mad. Well written Butter
August 18th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Is the offset line the freedom or the break? Is it the crowd that is insane or the man they label mad. Well written Butter
August 18th, 2026 04:35
Entropy
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing random in Newtonian physics or under laws of synchrony as proposed by Carl Jung, neither in magic\'s paradigm written in Alister Crowley\'s Migick in Theory and Practice. Only in Quantum Theory is random considered. Nicely written
August 16th, 2026 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing random in Newtonian physics or under laws of synchrony as proposed by Carl Jung, neither in magic\'s paradigm written in Alister Crowley\'s Migick in Theory and Practice. Only in Quantum Theory is random considered. Nicely written
August 16th, 2026 07:36
Entropy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this has a wonderfully unsettled energy to it. The weather, the motion, the pressure...everything feels chaotic, but the poem keeps asking whether that chaos is really as random as it appears. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Butter, this has a wonderfully unsettled energy to it. The weather, the motion, the pressure...everything feels chaotic, but the poem keeps asking whether that chaos is really as random as it appears. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:37
What makes us?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Butter...this is thoughtful, hopeful, and visually creative. I especially love the formatting...the movement across the page gives each thought room to stand on its own while still belonging to the whole. Really enjoyed this, my friend....and yes, love the challenge and the results! Keep it going!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Butter...this is thoughtful, hopeful, and visually creative. I especially love the formatting...the movement across the page gives each thought room to stand on its own while still belonging to the whole. Really enjoyed this, my friend....and yes, love the challenge and the results! Keep it going!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2026 08:12
What makes us?
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely positive view of the race. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely positive view of the race. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 03:51
Horizonless departure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is haunting. There’s something almost mythic in the idea of pursuing what lies beyond ordinary reach, especially when the pursuit itself becomes the danger. Really strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is haunting. There’s something almost mythic in the idea of pursuing what lies beyond ordinary reach, especially when the pursuit itself becomes the danger. Really strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:39
Horizonless departure
sorenbarrett said:
There is a claustrophobic feel to this as submarine was mentioned and a fear of depths when breathing comes into the picture. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
There is a claustrophobic feel to this as submarine was mentioned and a fear of depths when breathing comes into the picture. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 04:18
Forgive me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Butter…this carries a lot of pain in a very compact space. There’s guilt, resignation, and a kind of exhausted searching for a way through what keeps festering underneath. It feels deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Butter…this carries a lot of pain in a very compact space. There’s guilt, resignation, and a kind of exhausted searching for a way through what keeps festering underneath. It feels deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:51
Forgive me?
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought. Clever and nicely written
August 13th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought. Clever and nicely written
August 13th, 2026 07:15
When hell freezes
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphor seems to have character as well as value implications. Nicely written
August 12th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphor seems to have character as well as value implications. Nicely written
August 12th, 2026 04:09
Is it all worth it- in the end that is
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one!
August 11th, 2026 10:08
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one!
August 11th, 2026 10:08
Is it all worth it- in the end that is
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most interesting write about an undesired thought that returns and is questioned or given the author\'s note a thought that one does not feel worthy of that comes knocking. Well done
August 11th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most interesting write about an undesired thought that returns and is questioned or given the author\'s note a thought that one does not feel worthy of that comes knocking. Well done
August 11th, 2026 04:00
Milky blue-
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes one think. Its meaning drifts in the wind drowning out other thoughts. Well done
August 10th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes one think. Its meaning drifts in the wind drowning out other thoughts. Well done
August 10th, 2026 03:52
We exist among the stars
2781 said:
yin or yang or a bit of both. Stars are bright; I heard a third were down here.
August 9th, 2026 05:01
2781 said:
yin or yang or a bit of both. Stars are bright; I heard a third were down here.
August 9th, 2026 05:01
We exist among the stars
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive poetic look at the present state. Said in so few words it holds a hopeful feeling
August 9th, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive poetic look at the present state. Said in so few words it holds a hopeful feeling
August 9th, 2026 04:42
