Comments received on poems by Butter
Horizonless departure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is haunting. There’s something almost mythic in the idea of pursuing what lies beyond ordinary reach, especially when the pursuit itself becomes the danger. Really strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is haunting. There’s something almost mythic in the idea of pursuing what lies beyond ordinary reach, especially when the pursuit itself becomes the danger. Really strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:39
Horizonless departure
sorenbarrett said:
There is a claustrophobic feel to this as submarine was mentioned and a fear of depths when breathing comes into the picture. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
There is a claustrophobic feel to this as submarine was mentioned and a fear of depths when breathing comes into the picture. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 04:18
Forgive me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Butter…this carries a lot of pain in a very compact space. There’s guilt, resignation, and a kind of exhausted searching for a way through what keeps festering underneath. It feels deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Butter…this carries a lot of pain in a very compact space. There’s guilt, resignation, and a kind of exhausted searching for a way through what keeps festering underneath. It feels deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:51
Forgive me?
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought. Clever and nicely written
August 13th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought. Clever and nicely written
August 13th, 2026 07:15
When hell freezes
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphor seems to have character as well as value implications. Nicely written
August 12th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphor seems to have character as well as value implications. Nicely written
August 12th, 2026 04:09
Is it all worth it- in the end that is
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one!
August 11th, 2026 10:08
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one!
August 11th, 2026 10:08
Is it all worth it- in the end that is
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most interesting write about an undesired thought that returns and is questioned or given the author\'s note a thought that one does not feel worthy of that comes knocking. Well done
August 11th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most interesting write about an undesired thought that returns and is questioned or given the author\'s note a thought that one does not feel worthy of that comes knocking. Well done
August 11th, 2026 04:00
Milky blue-
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes one think. Its meaning drifts in the wind drowning out other thoughts. Well done
August 10th, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes one think. Its meaning drifts in the wind drowning out other thoughts. Well done
August 10th, 2026 03:52
We exist among the stars
2781 said:
yin or yang or a bit of both. Stars are bright; I heard a third were down here.
August 9th, 2026 05:01
2781 said:
yin or yang or a bit of both. Stars are bright; I heard a third were down here.
August 9th, 2026 05:01
We exist among the stars
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive poetic look at the present state. Said in so few words it holds a hopeful feeling
August 9th, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive poetic look at the present state. Said in so few words it holds a hopeful feeling
August 9th, 2026 04:42
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