Comments received on poems by Themillenialsliewithinusnow
The magician\'s lyric
sorenbarrett said:
A simple trick when known but amazes when the secret is kept. Well written it remains the same in metaphor for many things in life.
August 11th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A simple trick when known but amazes when the secret is kept. Well written it remains the same in metaphor for many things in life.
August 11th, 2026 04:03
Curses of ashes
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphoric write speaks of mirrors broken that cut as do our memories and view of ourselves. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
This metaphoric write speaks of mirrors broken that cut as do our memories and view of ourselves. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 06:03
The secured box
sorenbarrett said:
A look to the heavens when one is tied down. Metaphoric possibly of being tied to life and the earth. Well done
August 9th, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
A look to the heavens when one is tied down. Metaphoric possibly of being tied to life and the earth. Well done
August 9th, 2026 15:57
