Comments received on poems by CanaryInTheGrave
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sorenbarrett said:
It seems to me some people are locked in their conviction being rather stiff and judgmental. Nicely painted.
September 14th, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
It seems to me some people are locked in their conviction being rather stiff and judgmental. Nicely painted.
September 14th, 2026 03:46
Aborted Crane: [in|S|ul]/TATIONARY\\
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in metaphor can be taken quite sexually being sensual and erotic in its images. Nicely pictured it flows on to its end. Well done
September 12th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in metaphor can be taken quite sexually being sensual and erotic in its images. Nicely pictured it flows on to its end. Well done
September 12th, 2026 03:58
Wrath of Will
sorenbarrett said:
Fantasy runs through this poem of fantastic beings and creatures. Nicely done
September 8th, 2026 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
Fantasy runs through this poem of fantastic beings and creatures. Nicely done
September 8th, 2026 18:31
Chthonic Nights: Screams Of The Tamp-Man
sorenbarrett said:
Darkness in this write of underworld and creepy crawly thing that go bump in the night. Well done
September 7th, 2026 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
Darkness in this write of underworld and creepy crawly thing that go bump in the night. Well done
September 7th, 2026 14:54
Pythius
sorenbarrett said:
Illness and disease fill this write where corruption takes over and deterioration is the end. Well done
September 6th, 2026 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
Illness and disease fill this write where corruption takes over and deterioration is the end. Well done
September 6th, 2026 11:24
Black Dogs Circlin\'
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dark in its images this poem takes the reader into a dystopian world of suffering and pain. Nicely written
September 4th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and dark in its images this poem takes the reader into a dystopian world of suffering and pain. Nicely written
September 4th, 2026 03:51
Tallow Candles and the Offal Stench
sorenbarrett said:
Great images penned here \"scathed by grace\'s belting straps\" \"the disembowelment of tomorrow\" \"Flayed in the slipstream of someday\". It speaks to me of dreams never actualized and action never taken or lost. Well done.
September 3rd, 2026 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
Great images penned here \"scathed by grace\'s belting straps\" \"the disembowelment of tomorrow\" \"Flayed in the slipstream of someday\". It speaks to me of dreams never actualized and action never taken or lost. Well done.
September 3rd, 2026 09:25
A Hole
sorenbarrett said:
Anticipation and terror written into this poem. Nicely imaged
September 2nd, 2026 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
Anticipation and terror written into this poem. Nicely imaged
September 2nd, 2026 20:51
The Nail That Sticks Out
sorenbarrett said:
A many sided poem of different presented with a point. Nicely written it appears different is fine in our mind as long as it does not effect us adversely. No Hitlers, serial killers, people talking too loud in the theater or church, fat people in too small of swim suits on the beach, people smacking their lips in a restaurant, farting in public or letting their dog shit on your lawn. Different a word of many definitions depending upon who is using it. Nicely done
September 1st, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A many sided poem of different presented with a point. Nicely written it appears different is fine in our mind as long as it does not effect us adversely. No Hitlers, serial killers, people talking too loud in the theater or church, fat people in too small of swim suits on the beach, people smacking their lips in a restaurant, farting in public or letting their dog shit on your lawn. Different a word of many definitions depending upon who is using it. Nicely done
September 1st, 2026 03:58
Where Small Things Break
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents a dark image and feel that is turned around in a haunting way that is even more creepy at the end. Well written
August 31st, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents a dark image and feel that is turned around in a haunting way that is even more creepy at the end. Well written
August 31st, 2026 06:57
Panopticon
sorenbarrett said:
This neighborhood fine groomed and ordered with meticulous rules and laws seem a little too meticulous for my taste being of a little more unruly sort and more likely to let nature take her course. Well written.
August 30th, 2026 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
This neighborhood fine groomed and ordered with meticulous rules and laws seem a little too meticulous for my taste being of a little more unruly sort and more likely to let nature take her course. Well written.
August 30th, 2026 10:31
Saturnalien
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the description of another planet foreign to earth and our life but no less beautiful. Well written
August 29th, 2026 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the description of another planet foreign to earth and our life but no less beautiful. Well written
August 29th, 2026 20:28
MultiplEye X DivEyed
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of violence and battle. Well written
August 27th, 2026 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of violence and battle. Well written
August 27th, 2026 16:37
Delusive Days, Dilated Nights
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid imagery fills this poem painting days and nights sleepless and fanciful. Well done
August 27th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid imagery fills this poem painting days and nights sleepless and fanciful. Well done
August 27th, 2026 04:19
Posthumous Pardon
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal a hard thing to swallow even if it is death. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal a hard thing to swallow even if it is death. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 13:34
Swamp Thing: The Chonburi Mire
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal it builds a dystopia of darkness and forced compliance. Nicely worded
August 17th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal it builds a dystopia of darkness and forced compliance. Nicely worded
August 17th, 2026 13:29
Canaries In The Grave
sorenbarrett said:
It resembles reals stories going back through history to the murder of Jane Jones aka Jane Good and the formation of Scotland Yard. Nicely conceived and written it has a most haunting feel as a spirit speaks from the grave. Very nicely done and a fave
August 16th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
It resembles reals stories going back through history to the murder of Jane Jones aka Jane Good and the formation of Scotland Yard. Nicely conceived and written it has a most haunting feel as a spirit speaks from the grave. Very nicely done and a fave
August 16th, 2026 04:39
Reanimated Past
sorenbarrett said:
A nightmare in a poem of demons and abuse. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A nightmare in a poem of demons and abuse. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 17:00
On The Sleeve
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and fantastic this poem brings in the mythical and make it dreamlike. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and fantastic this poem brings in the mythical and make it dreamlike. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 04:47
