Comments received on poems by CanaryInTheGrave
Where Small Things Break
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents a dark image and feel that is turned around in a haunting way that is even more creepy at the end. Well written
August 31st, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents a dark image and feel that is turned around in a haunting way that is even more creepy at the end. Well written
August 31st, 2026 06:57
Panopticon
sorenbarrett said:
This neighborhood fine groomed and ordered with meticulous rules and laws seem a little too meticulous for my taste being of a little more unruly sort and more likely to let nature take her course. Well written.
August 30th, 2026 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
This neighborhood fine groomed and ordered with meticulous rules and laws seem a little too meticulous for my taste being of a little more unruly sort and more likely to let nature take her course. Well written.
August 30th, 2026 10:31
Saturnalien
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the description of another planet foreign to earth and our life but no less beautiful. Well written
August 29th, 2026 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the description of another planet foreign to earth and our life but no less beautiful. Well written
August 29th, 2026 20:28
MultiplEye X DivEyed
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of violence and battle. Well written
August 27th, 2026 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of violence and battle. Well written
August 27th, 2026 16:37
Delusive Days, Dilated Nights
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid imagery fills this poem painting days and nights sleepless and fanciful. Well done
August 27th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid imagery fills this poem painting days and nights sleepless and fanciful. Well done
August 27th, 2026 04:19
Posthumous Pardon
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal a hard thing to swallow even if it is death. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal a hard thing to swallow even if it is death. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 13:34
Swamp Thing: The Chonburi Mire
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal it builds a dystopia of darkness and forced compliance. Nicely worded
August 17th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal it builds a dystopia of darkness and forced compliance. Nicely worded
August 17th, 2026 13:29
Canaries In The Grave
sorenbarrett said:
It resembles reals stories going back through history to the murder of Jane Jones aka Jane Good and the formation of Scotland Yard. Nicely conceived and written it has a most haunting feel as a spirit speaks from the grave. Very nicely done and a fave
August 16th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
It resembles reals stories going back through history to the murder of Jane Jones aka Jane Good and the formation of Scotland Yard. Nicely conceived and written it has a most haunting feel as a spirit speaks from the grave. Very nicely done and a fave
August 16th, 2026 04:39
Reanimated Past
sorenbarrett said:
A nightmare in a poem of demons and abuse. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A nightmare in a poem of demons and abuse. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 17:00
On The Sleeve
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and fantastic this poem brings in the mythical and make it dreamlike. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and fantastic this poem brings in the mythical and make it dreamlike. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 04:47
