Comments received on poems by yellow moon



And You\'ll Grow Old Surely
Doggerel Dave said:

Suppose you at the high school end of the life cycle leave my end alone and focus on the world around you?

September 24th, 2026 19:14

And You\'ll Grow Old Surely
sorenbarrett said:

Surely tis true and you put it well. Nicely done

September 24th, 2026 18:54

Lies
Fränz Müller said:

We are often far more special than even we realize. Sometimes we just need to see ourselves through the eyes of others to gain that fresh perspective. Great work!.

August 25th, 2026 21:37

Lies
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ll second Soren (above) on that. You have the freedom to be unobtrusive, to live life as you wish. And make judgements on perspective without the need to meet other\'s expectations.

August 24th, 2026 18:57

Lies
sorenbarrett said:

Average is the greatest advantage, one melts into a crowd, one is easily accepted, drawing little attention one gets peace. Nicely written

August 24th, 2026 04:44

I like lizards
Fränz Müller said:

I enjoyed this poem very much. Well done!

August 23rd, 2026 16:11

I like lizards
Doggerel Dave said:

Half a foot tall seems pretty big to me - are you sure they aren\'t young crocodiles? 😜
I only see very small lizards that scurry between gaps in the concrete.
Welcome and good luck with your poetry here.


August 22nd, 2026 18:01

I like lizards
sorenbarrett said:

Most interesting. Here we have large monitor lizards up to five feet long that are extremely fast but also timid. They have sharp claws so no one wants to touch them except some poor people that eat them. A fun read

August 22nd, 2026 13:08