Comments received on poems by iPsYcH0
Beauty is Pain.
Clark said:
Beautiful. I see that you said that you used to catfish which means you don\'t anymore. Please. Love yourself. I can see that you have learned from your mistakes but this poem shows that all that pain is still with you. Keep writing. You really are good. Not just your poem but you, inside and out. Feel free to inbox me whenever you would like, I\'m always hear to talk to or just listen. Once again, great poem.
January 21st, 2017 13:16
Clark said:
Beautiful. I see that you said that you used to catfish which means you don\'t anymore. Please. Love yourself. I can see that you have learned from your mistakes but this poem shows that all that pain is still with you. Keep writing. You really are good. Not just your poem but you, inside and out. Feel free to inbox me whenever you would like, I\'m always hear to talk to or just listen. Once again, great poem.
January 21st, 2017 13:16
Medicine.
Augustus said:
There\'s a cleansing freshness after a rain. Nicely done.
October 26th, 2016 23:49
Augustus said:
There\'s a cleansing freshness after a rain. Nicely done.
October 26th, 2016 23:49
Play.
Augustus said:
Wow. Sick mother. I\'m almost afraid to say I like this. I believe you did a good job of putting yourself in the mind of someone who would kill their children.
October 23rd, 2016 17:40
Augustus said:
Wow. Sick mother. I\'m almost afraid to say I like this. I believe you did a good job of putting yourself in the mind of someone who would kill their children.
October 23rd, 2016 17:40
Wonderland.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks IPSY CHO - Great Poem - I love ALICE and I love Wonderland - the subject of a thousand poems and there will be a thousand more. In the 21st C we all live in Wonderland and our Governments are filled with Mad Queens and our workplaces with White Rabbits - Doormice and Walruses and our bosses are Mad Hatters and the Tweedle Twins. YES indeed we are stuck in Wonderland - where (of course) the best people (always) are and (always) will be ! Yours BRIAN
June 1st, 2016 13:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks IPSY CHO - Great Poem - I love ALICE and I love Wonderland - the subject of a thousand poems and there will be a thousand more. In the 21st C we all live in Wonderland and our Governments are filled with Mad Queens and our workplaces with White Rabbits - Doormice and Walruses and our bosses are Mad Hatters and the Tweedle Twins. YES indeed we are stuck in Wonderland - where (of course) the best people (always) are and (always) will be ! Yours BRIAN
June 1st, 2016 13:00
Adam And Eve.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND - Thank you for a very challenging first poem. Because we are not programmed behavourwise - like animals - GOD created us with free will. The first HUMANS chose to listen to Satan rather than GOD which gives us all a bias to evil. We choose GUNS rather than GOD. In the UK we have much tighter Gun Laws. Which is a Blessing. The Gun Stores in the USA make me ill ! We inherit our character and ethics from Mum & Dad and that is a Blessing. I agree with you - it can only get worse. The Book of Revelation (Bible) tells us like it will be - we have been warned. Thanks for sharing and caring - BRIAN
May 22nd, 2016 03:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND - Thank you for a very challenging first poem. Because we are not programmed behavourwise - like animals - GOD created us with free will. The first HUMANS chose to listen to Satan rather than GOD which gives us all a bias to evil. We choose GUNS rather than GOD. In the UK we have much tighter Gun Laws. Which is a Blessing. The Gun Stores in the USA make me ill ! We inherit our character and ethics from Mum & Dad and that is a Blessing. I agree with you - it can only get worse. The Book of Revelation (Bible) tells us like it will be - we have been warned. Thanks for sharing and caring - BRIAN
May 22nd, 2016 03:19
