Comments received on poems by Justin010
A Love Prevented From Service
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JUSTIN - Great first poem full of longing as all love poems should be ! Love the structure rhyming coupleets and triplets give it great flow. Love the content lamenting you separation from Savannah (lovely name). As a Man I can empathise - separation really does make the heart grow fonder ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 23rd, 2016 04:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JUSTIN - Great first poem full of longing as all love poems should be ! Love the structure rhyming coupleets and triplets give it great flow. Love the content lamenting you separation from Savannah (lovely name). As a Man I can empathise - separation really does make the heart grow fonder ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 23rd, 2016 04:46