Comments received on poems by somberabyss



boys and girls
sorenbarrett said:

I love the diametric presentation from both sides. A brilliant concept used artfully in this write to highlight the plus\'s and minus\'s of both and in the end the conclusion that neither is worth it and it is solitude that both end with that is the object to be desired. A fave

October 23rd, 2026 11:40

boys and girls
Novaselic said:

I love both of the perspectives of wanting each other’s life despite both sides not having it any easy. This is very well written, great job :))

October 23rd, 2026 10:31

sinful tune
Fränz Müller said:

This brings back memories…🥹

September 24th, 2026 21:24

sinful tune
sorenbarrett said:

This reads of passion and desire overwhelming reason. Nicely done

September 23rd, 2026 11:58

only you
sorenbarrett said:

A focus on another that is supportive. Nicely done

September 9th, 2026 17:52

the waiting game
Fränz Müller said:

As Yogi Berra once said, it’s deja vu all over again!

September 2nd, 2026 16:57

the waiting game
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of waiting for the end and we all are one way or another. Well done

September 1st, 2026 17:49

for you
sorenbarrett said:

There are few things more difficult that a love unrequited. Well written

August 30th, 2026 14:41