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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LIBET - Thanks for your first poem and its unique focus ! We have a lot of poems where the living are speaking to the DEAD & DYING but not in the other direction. I've been to a Funeral today (Max died suddenly) but it made me think what would he have said ? Because it is replete with rhyme and rhythm you poem has great energy and fl;ow which is fitting with the topic. !t expresses hope that there is "life beyond death" and also when our friends pass on they still care for us - this is beautiful ! Your poem takes some of the fear out of death - thanks for sharing and caring. BRIAN

May 26th, 2016 13:09