Comments received on poems by Sadia Tuba
Grey color is gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SADIA - Thanks for a very haunting first poem. Grey is the colour of SADNESS neither Black nor White just grey, God gave us two great comfort zones both BLUE - The Sky and the Sea. Blue never makes me BLUE ! It always lifts my spirits - glad it banished her greyness. Love the structure mainly rhyming couplets (beautiful) and rippling with rhythm as became the the subject from grey to colour. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 27th, 2016 02:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SADIA - Thanks for a very haunting first poem. Grey is the colour of SADNESS neither Black nor White just grey, God gave us two great comfort zones both BLUE - The Sky and the Sea. Blue never makes me BLUE ! It always lifts my spirits - glad it banished her greyness. Love the structure mainly rhyming couplets (beautiful) and rippling with rhythm as became the the subject from grey to colour. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
May 27th, 2016 02:45