Comments received on poems by therainking
Angel Wings
Severus Alexander said:
"Angels have four wings.."
"With two they hide their faces.."
"And with two they fly.."
May 30th, 2016 16:55
Severus Alexander said:
"Angels have four wings.."
"With two they hide their faces.."
"And with two they fly.."
May 30th, 2016 16:55
Angel Wings
lysistrata said:
"Fly take flight my angel where other Angel's can be found"
I think it should be:
"Fly, take flight my angel where other Angels can be found" (even though I do not like the use of too many Angels in one sentence)
But it is a good start.Don't give up.
May 30th, 2016 09:44
lysistrata said:
"Fly take flight my angel where other Angel's can be found"
I think it should be:
"Fly, take flight my angel where other Angels can be found" (even though I do not like the use of too many Angels in one sentence)
But it is a good start.Don't give up.
May 30th, 2016 09:44
Angel Wings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAINKING (great name) - Love your first poem - full of ansgt and imagery. The structure is brilliant bursting with rhyme and rhythm as befits the subject, "Beyond the dark of the Moon" sugests death and separation. I too have watched Beautiful Angels snatched away by fate so i can empathise. I have Faith we will all be reunited again and you hint at that in this haunting poem. "Just as i know that i will see you soon". Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN
May 30th, 2016 03:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAINKING (great name) - Love your first poem - full of ansgt and imagery. The structure is brilliant bursting with rhyme and rhythm as befits the subject, "Beyond the dark of the Moon" sugests death and separation. I too have watched Beautiful Angels snatched away by fate so i can empathise. I have Faith we will all be reunited again and you hint at that in this haunting poem. "Just as i know that i will see you soon". Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN
May 30th, 2016 03:20
