Comments received on poems by almostsaidmore
The Other Woman
sorenbarrett said:
It is the end of the poem that brings it all together and makes its point. A lovely write.
September 17th, 2026 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
It is the end of the poem that brings it all together and makes its point. A lovely write.
September 17th, 2026 09:44
I run out of love like a phone\'s battery.
sorenbarrett said:
Here love is likened to the energy in a battery. Nicely written it works well.
September 13th, 2026 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
Here love is likened to the energy in a battery. Nicely written it works well.
September 13th, 2026 16:50
