Comments received on poems by Tropicana
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willyweed said:
this is good and very relatable to many. good form and interesting read. ww
August 14th, 2016 13:07
willyweed said:
this is good and very relatable to many. good form and interesting read. ww
August 14th, 2016 13:07
Maladaptive Daydreamer
willyweed said:
I am a daydream believer
good poem. I enjoyed reading it
you take a deep dive into an interesting matter, ww
June 30th, 2016 18:13
willyweed said:
I am a daydream believer
good poem. I enjoyed reading it
you take a deep dive into an interesting matter, ww
June 30th, 2016 18:13
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AwkwardDebaterGirl said:
Life will do as it wants but if you ever need a hand up I will be here. Depression is hard to deal with no matter the cause. I have some tips and tricks I have picked up to help my own if you'd like them. Have a lovely day. Beautiful piece.
June 24th, 2016 13:01
AwkwardDebaterGirl said:
Life will do as it wants but if you ever need a hand up I will be here. Depression is hard to deal with no matter the cause. I have some tips and tricks I have picked up to help my own if you'd like them. Have a lovely day. Beautiful piece.
June 24th, 2016 13:01
Maladaptive Daydreamer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MY FRIEND ~ You describe your disorder so well ~ It enables one to understand others with similar. That is the beauty of "personalised poetry" it is both cathartic and expressive. They leave ~ and leave you with fanciful wonder ! You still feel the experience inside you in the fundamental realms of your imagination ! Your language is "fantastic" ! YES ~ in many ways we are utilised through our subconscious by hidden forces which come and go. This is so so deep it defies analysis but i feel (inside me) what you are saying. Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 16th, 2016 17:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MY FRIEND ~ You describe your disorder so well ~ It enables one to understand others with similar. That is the beauty of "personalised poetry" it is both cathartic and expressive. They leave ~ and leave you with fanciful wonder ! You still feel the experience inside you in the fundamental realms of your imagination ! Your language is "fantastic" ! YES ~ in many ways we are utilised through our subconscious by hidden forces which come and go. This is so so deep it defies analysis but i feel (inside me) what you are saying. Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 16th, 2016 17:42
Maladaptive Daydreamer
John Lee said:
Amazing.. heart of burning fire.. daydreaming the day away.. feeling alone and rather be left alone.. sounds like my life!
June 16th, 2016 15:46
John Lee said:
Amazing.. heart of burning fire.. daydreaming the day away.. feeling alone and rather be left alone.. sounds like my life!
June 16th, 2016 15:46
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John Lee said:
This is a great poem.. i can relate to the forsaken feeling
June 16th, 2016 15:41
John Lee said:
This is a great poem.. i can relate to the forsaken feeling
June 16th, 2016 15:41
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lysistrata said:
Your poem is not FORSAKEN.
I like your small details,e.g. the use of "all ready/already" in lines 19-20 and your subject theme...
You could explore it more...
June 6th, 2016 09:22
lysistrata said:
Your poem is not FORSAKEN.
I like your small details,e.g. the use of "all ready/already" in lines 19-20 and your subject theme...
You could explore it more...
June 6th, 2016 09:22
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TROPICANA - Thanks for a great first poem. The structure is vibrant a single stanza "free verse" poem. There is a trace of rhyme but it pulsates with rhythm which complements the subject ! You have classified as SAD and - like you - to be forsaken by the one we desire does indeed make us wish we had never been born. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
June 5th, 2016 15:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TROPICANA - Thanks for a great first poem. The structure is vibrant a single stanza "free verse" poem. There is a trace of rhyme but it pulsates with rhythm which complements the subject ! You have classified as SAD and - like you - to be forsaken by the one we desire does indeed make us wish we had never been born. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
June 5th, 2016 15:52
