Comments received on poems by Pam Maxwell Alps
To a Deer
sorenbarrett said:
Poor marksmanship is a cruel fate. Cars do their share as well. A sad and poignant write.
September 24th, 2026 18:57
sorenbarrett said:
Poor marksmanship is a cruel fate. Cars do their share as well. A sad and poignant write.
September 24th, 2026 18:57
The Road of Life
sorenbarrett said:
There is a bright sense of hope in this poem that speaks in a classic Grecian style bringing to mind the fields of Elysian. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2026 17:34
sorenbarrett said:
There is a bright sense of hope in this poem that speaks in a classic Grecian style bringing to mind the fields of Elysian. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2026 17:34
War
sorenbarrett said:
There is an initial inability to forgive stated in this poem crying of a child, fire destruction and an asking of where God is when needed off planting an apple tree in the new world. The feeling of abandonment is quite strong here. Well expressed.
September 22nd, 2026 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
There is an initial inability to forgive stated in this poem crying of a child, fire destruction and an asking of where God is when needed off planting an apple tree in the new world. The feeling of abandonment is quite strong here. Well expressed.
September 22nd, 2026 15:56
