2 birds one stone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JEFF ~ Thanks for posting your very painful first poem - I trust you found it cathartic. My Sister is 38 and to me my most precious Friend. I know how I felt when she was ill or in an accident so in a small way I can empathise with you and your awful experience of losing your precious SIS ! The line "Lying in a casket" (from the rap) is very haunting and final and it chilled me as I read it. Your poem (song) pulsates with rhyme and rhythm which amplifies the tragedy of its content ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' BRIAN

June 14th, 2016 03:33