Comments received on poems by Farah



I'm done
Cheeky Missy said:

And like, you could add one more line...."I'm done with you." Same old story whenever "love" dies? Yet, again, isn't there forgiveness to keep it together when it is gone to pieces? I guess I ask the same question .....why can't it be so because I believe in it? and then live as if it can and will be....until truth proves me wrong. You expressed the progression of feelings when one gives up very well.

January 9th, 2011 21:34