Was it Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME MONICA ~ and thanks for a very poignant first poem. It had great flow and as I read it I felt the pain and bewilderment in your words and in your heart. True love is never one sided and your opening line "I have never loved a Man ~ the way I loved you" says it all. Don't doubt the veracity of your love ! That was love ! BUT it was not reciprocated and it made you (even) doubt the integrity of your love. I can empathise (I'm 33) because I have experienced the same. I too gave my all and was delusioned into thinking that her responses were motivated by her "love" at the same level ~ but ~ after she left the illusion faded and I realised her love was (in some way) false ! Mine however was always TRUE ! The end of your so so sad poem tells me that your "Incredible Love" was always "True Love" and his love turned out to be a sham. Real Men do cry and I wept as I felt the pain of your "unrequited love" at the end of your poem. Thanks for caring and sharing BRIAN

June 24th, 2016 00:02