Comments received on poems by lk
Always or Never?
lysistrata said:
"Have you ever done such a thing?
Used such a word
Then did away with it with a fling?
Always or Never?"
No,I avoid these 2 words(always,never). I believe in "Never say Never".....
But why do you care about the Society?
What about your small 'society'/community?
You are ,We are Human pieces of Eternity...🌌🌍🌝
Today I am nothing to You.
Tomorrow we could meet and you could decide that I am everything to You.
But basically I am simply a tiny creation and a small creator (I am satisfied with this deal! Aren't you?)
June 30th, 2016 09:38
lysistrata said:
"Have you ever done such a thing?
Used such a word
Then did away with it with a fling?
Always or Never?"
No,I avoid these 2 words(always,never). I believe in "Never say Never".....
But why do you care about the Society?
What about your small 'society'/community?
You are ,We are Human pieces of Eternity...🌌🌍🌝
Today I am nothing to You.
Tomorrow we could meet and you could decide that I am everything to You.
But basically I am simply a tiny creation and a small creator (I am satisfied with this deal! Aren't you?)
June 30th, 2016 09:38
Selfishness
lysistrata said:
But in the end one needs more courage to live than to kill himself.
So if not Selfish,then Coward ?!
But Suicide is certainly NOT a Heroic Act.
June 27th, 2016 08:13
lysistrata said:
But in the end one needs more courage to live than to kill himself.
So if not Selfish,then Coward ?!
But Suicide is certainly NOT a Heroic Act.
June 27th, 2016 08:13
Selfishness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LK ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem ~ which will make all who read it THINK ! I'm 33 so I'm old enough to have Friends & Family who have committed (or tried to commit) SUICIDE. It is very painful but I can say (hand on heart) that I have never called them SELFISH although many did. My first thought is always ~ WHAT MORE could I have done to prevent it. SUICIDE is always a "cry for help" and if it is unsuccessful we should rush to their aid with TLC and not JUDGEMENT. I agree with your prognosis SELFISH is the WRONG word. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours empatheticaly BRIAN
June 27th, 2016 05:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LK ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem ~ which will make all who read it THINK ! I'm 33 so I'm old enough to have Friends & Family who have committed (or tried to commit) SUICIDE. It is very painful but I can say (hand on heart) that I have never called them SELFISH although many did. My first thought is always ~ WHAT MORE could I have done to prevent it. SUICIDE is always a "cry for help" and if it is unsuccessful we should rush to their aid with TLC and not JUDGEMENT. I agree with your prognosis SELFISH is the WRONG word. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours empatheticaly BRIAN
June 27th, 2016 05:51
