Comments received on poems by bh965
Phoenix I
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BH ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem. Love the structure one continuous stanza fo rhyming couplets (my fave) ~ easy to read and recite. The subject ~ the daily struggle for life and seeking its meaning is something most of us can relate to ! Love the thought of rising from defeat and despair like a Phoenix reborn. For all Englishmen it is an apt reassurance following the recent events regarding the EU and The European Cup ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
June 28th, 2016 17:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BH ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem. Love the structure one continuous stanza fo rhyming couplets (my fave) ~ easy to read and recite. The subject ~ the daily struggle for life and seeking its meaning is something most of us can relate to ! Love the thought of rising from defeat and despair like a Phoenix reborn. For all Englishmen it is an apt reassurance following the recent events regarding the EU and The European Cup ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.
June 28th, 2016 17:16