Comments received on poems by headcase._
Time.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NOVA ~ Thanks for a very challenging first poem. Love the visual ! Time and Tide wait for nobody ~ BUT ~ it's how we approach them that makes the difference. A tide can drown you or give you a mega surf experience. Time is a good servant but a bad master ! Tempus fugit ~ Time does fly and it is the flight of time and the spite of time that you focus on in you opening stanzas. "Ruins your friendships ~ self-esteem ~ trust and (eventually) your fucking life !" There's a lot of truth in that ! You then focus on KNOWLEDGE and (in my experience) a little knowledge is a very dangerous thing and of the making of knowledge there is no end ! Time is a human concept and wearing a watch is an obsession with time ! We cannot stop time ~ we cannot reverse time ~ we all get 24 hours each day ~ coping with it (some say) gets more difficult every 24 hours ! This is the dilemma you explore AND FOR WHAT ? Great poem made me think. Thanks for sharing more please ~ Yours BRIAN
July 4th, 2016 03:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NOVA ~ Thanks for a very challenging first poem. Love the visual ! Time and Tide wait for nobody ~ BUT ~ it's how we approach them that makes the difference. A tide can drown you or give you a mega surf experience. Time is a good servant but a bad master ! Tempus fugit ~ Time does fly and it is the flight of time and the spite of time that you focus on in you opening stanzas. "Ruins your friendships ~ self-esteem ~ trust and (eventually) your fucking life !" There's a lot of truth in that ! You then focus on KNOWLEDGE and (in my experience) a little knowledge is a very dangerous thing and of the making of knowledge there is no end ! Time is a human concept and wearing a watch is an obsession with time ! We cannot stop time ~ we cannot reverse time ~ we all get 24 hours each day ~ coping with it (some say) gets more difficult every 24 hours ! This is the dilemma you explore AND FOR WHAT ? Great poem made me think. Thanks for sharing more please ~ Yours BRIAN
July 4th, 2016 03:44