Comments received on poems by camillerosecastillo
Piteous Proletariat
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CAMILLE ~ Thanks for a very challenging first poem. Love the structure it is replete with rhyme and rhythm and has great energy and flow. The energy suits the topic the "Entrenched conformity" and the "Entrancing call" of Capitalism equally in the USA and UK we are the "pawns" (weary workers) seviley "singing the blues" while the upper classes manipulate the pieces for their own gain ! At the end of the day we have to earn our crust so we keep our heads down and toe the Company line. Trump or Hillary ~ that is a question a choice between a rock and a hard place. The UK had abandoned Europe so we are still up the Creek but we've lost our paddle and are now at the back of Of Mister Obama's queue (line) ! Thanks for sahring ~ made me think. Yours BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 05:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CAMILLE ~ Thanks for a very challenging first poem. Love the structure it is replete with rhyme and rhythm and has great energy and flow. The energy suits the topic the "Entrenched conformity" and the "Entrancing call" of Capitalism equally in the USA and UK we are the "pawns" (weary workers) seviley "singing the blues" while the upper classes manipulate the pieces for their own gain ! At the end of the day we have to earn our crust so we keep our heads down and toe the Company line. Trump or Hillary ~ that is a question a choice between a rock and a hard place. The UK had abandoned Europe so we are still up the Creek but we've lost our paddle and are now at the back of Of Mister Obama's queue (line) ! Thanks for sahring ~ made me think. Yours BRIAN
July 5th, 2016 05:19
