Comments received on poems by Tony36
Lost
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written little tale of liberation here Tony36, full of gothic like imagery and sadly, ever so relatable.
Sometimes a fight is futile, for a dire situation cannot change, if a person who is the cause of such misery cannot change themself, so for your own sanity, to flee, is the only option left.
I imagine upon the very second of such an escape, Bruce Springsteen\'s \"Born to Run\" would play loud and proud as the soundtrack.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 20th, 2024 04:35
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written little tale of liberation here Tony36, full of gothic like imagery and sadly, ever so relatable.
Sometimes a fight is futile, for a dire situation cannot change, if a person who is the cause of such misery cannot change themself, so for your own sanity, to flee, is the only option left.
I imagine upon the very second of such an escape, Bruce Springsteen\'s \"Born to Run\" would play loud and proud as the soundtrack.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 20th, 2024 04:35
Lost
Thad Wilk said:
A really deep, emotional
and touching write!😢
Awesome presentation,
eloquently penned!! 💫
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 19th, 2024 19:39
Thad Wilk said:
A really deep, emotional
and touching write!😢
Awesome presentation,
eloquently penned!! 💫
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 19th, 2024 19:39
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
We all got to do what we have to do. There are feelings of abuse and bullying in this poem and out of fight of flight flight is chosen.
August 19th, 2024 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
We all got to do what we have to do. There are feelings of abuse and bullying in this poem and out of fight of flight flight is chosen.
August 19th, 2024 07:55
Musical Chase
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence between two musical notes is so important in music soren. Good write about the birth of music.
Andy
https://youtu.be/yoAbXwr3qkg?si=MnCblwUmXcTEm80Z
August 19th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence between two musical notes is so important in music soren. Good write about the birth of music.
Andy
https://youtu.be/yoAbXwr3qkg?si=MnCblwUmXcTEm80Z
August 19th, 2024 01:26
Musical Chase
AuburnScribbler said:
This is a wonderfully written journey, about how a good team can be built up, to compose such harmony.
Also, your poem reminds us, that everyone is different, and therefore live by different rhythms, but when such polyrhythms can merge, as you have mentioned, it can be quite special to behold.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 18th, 2024 07:11
AuburnScribbler said:
This is a wonderfully written journey, about how a good team can be built up, to compose such harmony.
Also, your poem reminds us, that everyone is different, and therefore live by different rhythms, but when such polyrhythms can merge, as you have mentioned, it can be quite special to behold.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 18th, 2024 07:11
Musical Chase
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper notes than music fill this sheet and it may apply to life itself. Nicely written
August 18th, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper notes than music fill this sheet and it may apply to life itself. Nicely written
August 18th, 2024 07:08
Alone
rhmn_7 said:
Building a life \"for us\" and not \"with us\", that seems subtle but is very significant!
August 18th, 2024 06:06
rhmn_7 said:
Building a life \"for us\" and not \"with us\", that seems subtle but is very significant!
August 18th, 2024 06:06
Alone
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but can be looked at as a new start. Looking back leads one to trip. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but can be looked at as a new start. Looking back leads one to trip. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 09:08
Alone
Teddy.15 said:
I find this incredibly sad because you were trying to build a life for you both, sometimes miscommunication can change the path of life, such a shame, I know how hard it is to struggle to keep together through thick and thin, I\'ve done it with my husband, now we are in our late 40\'s and everything is so much easier, if two people can stay the course it\'s a special special bond, so many cannot, this is true for so many. You pulled at my heart strings with this, may you find someone special one day soon. 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:54
Teddy.15 said:
I find this incredibly sad because you were trying to build a life for you both, sometimes miscommunication can change the path of life, such a shame, I know how hard it is to struggle to keep together through thick and thin, I\'ve done it with my husband, now we are in our late 40\'s and everything is so much easier, if two people can stay the course it\'s a special special bond, so many cannot, this is true for so many. You pulled at my heart strings with this, may you find someone special one day soon. 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:54
Alone
Thoughtless said:
A tale told out of time. People subtly change without adjusting. Excellent!
August 17th, 2024 08:15
Thoughtless said:
A tale told out of time. People subtly change without adjusting. Excellent!
August 17th, 2024 08:15
Sitting in the dock
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful vision of places I\'ve been nostalgia and feelings of joy. Bright and warm Wonderful!
August 16th, 2024 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful vision of places I\'ve been nostalgia and feelings of joy. Bright and warm Wonderful!
August 16th, 2024 07:41
At the Beach
AuburnScribbler said:
I miss the coast Tony36, and this scene that you have penned makes me miss it more.
Nicely written, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 16th, 2024 06:16
AuburnScribbler said:
I miss the coast Tony36, and this scene that you have penned makes me miss it more.
Nicely written, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 16th, 2024 06:16
Nature walk
Cassie58 said:
A walk in the woods. Time spent with nature is never wasted. Lovely imagery here and great description. Enjoyed the read.
August 15th, 2024 16:03
Cassie58 said:
A walk in the woods. Time spent with nature is never wasted. Lovely imagery here and great description. Enjoyed the read.
August 15th, 2024 16:03
Nature walk
sorenbarrett said:
Nature is beautiful and I take it in whenever possible. Nicely written.
August 15th, 2024 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
Nature is beautiful and I take it in whenever possible. Nicely written.
August 15th, 2024 10:00
Meditation
Goldfinch60 said:
My feelings exactly Tony, breathe in the good and breathe out the bad.
Andy
August 15th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
My feelings exactly Tony, breathe in the good and breathe out the bad.
Andy
August 15th, 2024 01:41
Meditation
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
great advice!! 👍
I loved it so much
I read it twice!!! 😀
My pleasure to
read indeed! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 14th, 2024 21:52
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
great advice!! 👍
I loved it so much
I read it twice!!! 😀
My pleasure to
read indeed! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 14th, 2024 21:52
Meditation
Xiaobai Yulan said:
I never have the patience to meditate, though I know it is good for the mind.
August 14th, 2024 19:26
Xiaobai Yulan said:
I never have the patience to meditate, though I know it is good for the mind.
August 14th, 2024 19:26
Meditation
Cassie58 said:
Now repeat ten times - feeling better already. Meditation has to be good for you. Practice breathing techniques. Great read.
August 14th, 2024 14:31
Cassie58 said:
Now repeat ten times - feeling better already. Meditation has to be good for you. Practice breathing techniques. Great read.
August 14th, 2024 14:31
Meditation
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice I often use breathing as a technique for relaxation and to clear the mind. Well written
August 14th, 2024 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice I often use breathing as a technique for relaxation and to clear the mind. Well written
August 14th, 2024 09:05
Meditation
Bella Shepard said:
Such words of wisdom should be heeded, and practiced. Meditation is an important part of my day, and everything you say here is oh so true. Love it!
August 14th, 2024 07:51
Bella Shepard said:
Such words of wisdom should be heeded, and practiced. Meditation is an important part of my day, and everything you say here is oh so true. Love it!
August 14th, 2024 07:51
Meditation
orchidee said:
I tried something like this - holding my breath for 24 hours. I did it, but did not feel well afterwards. lol. I\'m telling porkies.
August 14th, 2024 07:33
orchidee said:
I tried something like this - holding my breath for 24 hours. I did it, but did not feel well afterwards. lol. I\'m telling porkies.
August 14th, 2024 07:33
At the Beach
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Tony. There\'s something so soothing about the waves.
August 14th, 2024 06:31
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Tony. There\'s something so soothing about the waves.
August 14th, 2024 06:31
At the Beach
MendedFences27 said:
There is a magic that comes from being near the sea, it somehow relieves tension and allows one to relax and enjoy the surf. It is therapeutic. Nice poem. - Phil A.
August 13th, 2024 12:25
MendedFences27 said:
There is a magic that comes from being near the sea, it somehow relieves tension and allows one to relax and enjoy the surf. It is therapeutic. Nice poem. - Phil A.
August 13th, 2024 12:25
At the Beach
Cassie58 said:
Can’t think of a nicer way to relax. Those beach days are awesome. I enjoyed reading your poem.
August 13th, 2024 12:18
Cassie58 said:
Can’t think of a nicer way to relax. Those beach days are awesome. I enjoyed reading your poem.
August 13th, 2024 12:18
I write
Teddy.15 said:
Until that is, the next time your light is lit! Beautiful. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 09:13
Teddy.15 said:
Until that is, the next time your light is lit! Beautiful. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 09:13
I write
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Sometimes you may need inspiration, but a true poets well never dry.
If you have time to read, please read my poem \"I feel words\"
August 13th, 2024 08:57
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Sometimes you may need inspiration, but a true poets well never dry.
If you have time to read, please read my poem \"I feel words\"
August 13th, 2024 08:57
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