The Way He Looked At Her and the way she looked back at him.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JEX ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem exploring the paradox of "unreciprocated love" ! I have experienced both sides Girls I loved to distraction who looked right through me and Girls who loved me but didn't move me ! On of life's paradoxes. But when the love is mutual it is beyond awesome ! Your first stanza describes perfectly how a Man can fall in love with "perfection". Stanza two describes her cold response to his ardour. No empathy and a negative response "You're wasting your time" and an inability to understand him ~ he was empty and she was bored. When I get such vibes ~ I retreat into my own cocoon ~ some Men however persist blinkered and bemused by Love and blinded to reality. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 5th, 2016 14:39