Comments received on poems by Celliehwyn89
Why try?
Celliehwyn89 said:
But I will grow a new heart out of the ashes. Thanks for the comments guys. :)
July 6th, 2016 16:14
Celliehwyn89 said:
But I will grow a new heart out of the ashes. Thanks for the comments guys. :)
July 6th, 2016 16:14
Why try?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CELLIE ~ Thanks for a well written and powerful first poem. LOVE is the best and worst emotion and experience we will ever have ! When it's GOOD it's very very good ~ but when it goes BAD it's horrid. Your poem is intriguing and explores "Aspects of Love". The final triplet is very very sad ~ BUT ~ in my experience it does happen ! Well we are shattered on the floor # And I don't even want # To put us back together ! Broken hearts and broken lives never mend. Thanks for sharin' BRIAN
July 6th, 2016 15:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CELLIE ~ Thanks for a well written and powerful first poem. LOVE is the best and worst emotion and experience we will ever have ! When it's GOOD it's very very good ~ but when it goes BAD it's horrid. Your poem is intriguing and explores "Aspects of Love". The final triplet is very very sad ~ BUT ~ in my experience it does happen ! Well we are shattered on the floor # And I don't even want # To put us back together ! Broken hearts and broken lives never mend. Thanks for sharin' BRIAN
July 6th, 2016 15:40
