Comments received on poems by Segolene
i hate it
lysistrata said:
Are you Agoraphobic?
Relax,Grow up and Know Yourself.
And thanks for the book suggestion. I'll check it out.
July 10th, 2016 02:12
lysistrata said:
Are you Agoraphobic?
Relax,Grow up and Know Yourself.
And thanks for the book suggestion. I'll check it out.
July 10th, 2016 02:12
i hate it
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks KATTY ~ There is a lot of truth in your poem ~ AND ~ in my experience it is a true reflection of LIFE ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 9th, 2016 15:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks KATTY ~ There is a lot of truth in your poem ~ AND ~ in my experience it is a true reflection of LIFE ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 9th, 2016 15:42
I can\'t love
PerpetualFlowers said:
This is really good, haha. I look forward to more
July 7th, 2016 18:43
PerpetualFlowers said:
This is really good, haha. I look forward to more
July 7th, 2016 18:43
I can\'t love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KATTY ~ Great first poem written ~ as you say ~ not from experience but from your imagination and in detention. Obviously the detention stirred your muse and you produced a great poem. Great structure ~ rhyming couplets ~ give it great flow and rhythm which suits the racy subject. In time you will find that ~ in reality ~ love can be like that ~ always a bit complex and never simplistic. Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 7th, 2016 16:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KATTY ~ Great first poem written ~ as you say ~ not from experience but from your imagination and in detention. Obviously the detention stirred your muse and you produced a great poem. Great structure ~ rhyming couplets ~ give it great flow and rhythm which suits the racy subject. In time you will find that ~ in reality ~ love can be like that ~ always a bit complex and never simplistic. Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 7th, 2016 16:43
