Comments received on poems by Teenage_misfit
Sticks & Stones
willyweed said:
love your poem and attitude!
welcome !!! peace WW
July 8th, 2016 08:12
willyweed said:
love your poem and attitude!
welcome !!! peace WW
July 8th, 2016 08:12
Sticks & Stones
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CEZANNE ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem. Great structure ~ great subject. "Imagine no possessions ~ I wonder if you can ~ No need for greed or hunger ~ A brotherhood of man ~ Imagine all the people ~ sharing all the world ............. ! MLK had a Dream ~ The USA has had its first Black President but still the hatred and racial discrimination goes on ! Yes indeed Sister we need to not only IMAGINE but really make it happen "Living together peacefully ~ without discrimination against race ~ religion ~ gender etc". We can make it happen ~ but ~ we must let it begin with me ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2016 08:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CEZANNE ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem. Great structure ~ great subject. "Imagine no possessions ~ I wonder if you can ~ No need for greed or hunger ~ A brotherhood of man ~ Imagine all the people ~ sharing all the world ............. ! MLK had a Dream ~ The USA has had its first Black President but still the hatred and racial discrimination goes on ! Yes indeed Sister we need to not only IMAGINE but really make it happen "Living together peacefully ~ without discrimination against race ~ religion ~ gender etc". We can make it happen ~ but ~ we must let it begin with me ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2016 08:00
Sticks & Stones
inink said:
wow thank you for sharing this, it is very powerful and touching. I look forward to more of your poetry.
July 8th, 2016 07:55
inink said:
wow thank you for sharing this, it is very powerful and touching. I look forward to more of your poetry.
July 8th, 2016 07:55
