Comments received on poems by celestialhippie
The Beginning
Daniel said:
Brilliantly written! A very poignant and heartfelt poem. Depression is something we find very hard to face, and even harder to know how to help those who suffer. Thank you for sharing.
July 9th, 2016 22:14
Daniel said:
Brilliantly written! A very poignant and heartfelt poem. Depression is something we find very hard to face, and even harder to know how to help those who suffer. Thank you for sharing.
July 9th, 2016 22:14
How Could No One See?
Neaves15 said:
many have seen
and many have tried
but you allow no one to see
what is on the inside
i have gone down that road
and experienced the pain
tried to take mine twice
but luckily i was saved
whether it was simply chance
or a complete miracle
i stand strong in my body now
both spiritual and physical
after countless sleepless nights
and body dropping tragedies
i now refuse to allow myself
to become another casualty
please talk to someone
whether best friend or complete stranger
put away those thoughts
and rid yourself from your own danger
there are people out there waiting
with arms open wide
waiting on you
to take your first stride
July 9th, 2016 19:05
Neaves15 said:
many have seen
and many have tried
but you allow no one to see
what is on the inside
i have gone down that road
and experienced the pain
tried to take mine twice
but luckily i was saved
whether it was simply chance
or a complete miracle
i stand strong in my body now
both spiritual and physical
after countless sleepless nights
and body dropping tragedies
i now refuse to allow myself
to become another casualty
please talk to someone
whether best friend or complete stranger
put away those thoughts
and rid yourself from your own danger
there are people out there waiting
with arms open wide
waiting on you
to take your first stride
July 9th, 2016 19:05
