Comments received on poems by beachbum11



Dark December Day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks BECCA for such a beautifully written poem encapsulating such a sad sad message. To lose one's Dad is tragic ~ to lose him in that way compounds the tragedy. Your final three lines give a blessed hope that you will MEET AGAIN in GLORY. Thanks for having the courage to share ~ I pray that you found it cathartic ~ Yours BRIAN

July 14th, 2016 04:29

Are You Still Proud Of Me?
Tony36 said:

Great write, very heartfelt

July 13th, 2016 14:58

Are You Still Proud Of Me?
willyweed said:

very painful to lose a dad, just be happy that's what he would want.
And hold close the thought that one fine day you'll be reunited and that the spirit of his love is with you always. heartfelt piece. ww

July 13th, 2016 10:37

Are You Still Proud Of Me?
camille said:

This made me cry .. Just beautiful x

July 13th, 2016 10:33

Are You Still Proud Of Me?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME BB11 ~ Thanks for a beautifully penned poem (I love rhyming couplets) straight from your loving heart. I've still got my Dad and he is just like yours. The death of a Parent (at what ever age) is always very hard to bear ~ the light goes out ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ every blessing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 13th, 2016 03:43