Comments received on poems by Shawna
Society
AlitaOpal said:
There is only one you and one me in this world..
I find authenticity beautiful just like your poem..
I really enjoyed reading 🌹
July 14th, 2016 09:29
AlitaOpal said:
There is only one you and one me in this world..
I find authenticity beautiful just like your poem..
I really enjoyed reading 🌹
July 14th, 2016 09:29
Society
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHAWNA ~ Love the poem in both its form and function. Your message is that we live in a very superficial World were people (especially females) are judged by how they conform to fashion's norms and beck and call. Cosmetics ~ piercings ~ tatts ~ bare midrifts etc etc. BUT ~ You are unique ~ you are yourself ~ you are lovely ~ a free Spirit ~ you are BEAUTIFUL ~ I would love your SCENT ~ the Scent of a Natural Woman ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 14th, 2016 04:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHAWNA ~ Love the poem in both its form and function. Your message is that we live in a very superficial World were people (especially females) are judged by how they conform to fashion's norms and beck and call. Cosmetics ~ piercings ~ tatts ~ bare midrifts etc etc. BUT ~ You are unique ~ you are yourself ~ you are lovely ~ a free Spirit ~ you are BEAUTIFUL ~ I would love your SCENT ~ the Scent of a Natural Woman ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 14th, 2016 04:40
I See You
willyweed said:
someone's in love and it's a beautiful thing! write on ! ww
July 13th, 2016 10:17
willyweed said:
someone's in love and it's a beautiful thing! write on ! ww
July 13th, 2016 10:17
I See You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SHAWNA ~ Thanks for a very elegant and loving first poem ~ straight from your loving heart ! We all have a capacity to LOVE imperfection and the more FLAWS a person has only serves to increase our LOVE. You have explores a principle which is both a paradox and also very beautiful. I love somebody because of WHO they are not because of WHAT they are or WHERE they are socially ! Thanks for caring and caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 13th, 2016 03:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SHAWNA ~ Thanks for a very elegant and loving first poem ~ straight from your loving heart ! We all have a capacity to LOVE imperfection and the more FLAWS a person has only serves to increase our LOVE. You have explores a principle which is both a paradox and also very beautiful. I love somebody because of WHO they are not because of WHAT they are or WHERE they are socially ! Thanks for caring and caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 13th, 2016 03:36