Comments received on poems by Dessy.23



That\'s just Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME DESSY ~ Thanks for a very frank and graphic and personal first poem. The line in the middle is very telling "Now don't get me wrong the sex was amazing". That is the experience of both Males & Females ~ sex is amazing ~ especially when you are (who think you are) in love. However there is an exploitive side (normally males exploiting females) "Males using females just to say they they got a goal (scored)". That attitude (for me) just cheapens Ladies (makes them feel like a whore) and turns something beautiful (sex) into something sordid.I always council Young Ladies (Students) to treat their virginity as something very special that is their's to share with someone special not something to be "snached" from them. This is why the rape of a virgin is such a henious crime As you say "That's life" but in a better World it wouldn't be ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 13th, 2016 15:59