Comments received on poems by jsim
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Kurt Philip Behm said:
You wrapped all of our greatest fears in beautiful words ....
July 16th, 2016 21:20
Kurt Philip Behm said:
You wrapped all of our greatest fears in beautiful words ....
July 16th, 2016 21:20
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AlitaOpal said:
Thank you for your beautiful poem..
I have suffered a loss of a child and you have done what I couldn't..
So touched..
🌹🌹🌹
July 16th, 2016 14:53
AlitaOpal said:
Thank you for your beautiful poem..
I have suffered a loss of a child and you have done what I couldn't..
So touched..
🌹🌹🌹
July 16th, 2016 14:53
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JSIM ~ For a very poignant first poem ~ GONE ! Your lover aroused all your senses ~ sight ~ sound ~ scent ~ savour ~ snuggles ! As you say ~ sometimes one person can be everything to us ~ child ~ friend ~ beloved ~ guide and when they go everything goes with them ! Every day is unbearable ~ GONE ! Elegant "free verse poem" Thanks for sharing.~ BRIAN.
July 16th, 2016 14:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JSIM ~ For a very poignant first poem ~ GONE ! Your lover aroused all your senses ~ sight ~ sound ~ scent ~ savour ~ snuggles ! As you say ~ sometimes one person can be everything to us ~ child ~ friend ~ beloved ~ guide and when they go everything goes with them ! Every day is unbearable ~ GONE ! Elegant "free verse poem" Thanks for sharing.~ BRIAN.
July 16th, 2016 14:24
