Comments received on poems by thinfatman
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Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. I love how you've poetically depicted the dismal melancholy and deluded hopelessness. Excellent! Misery so well drawn.
January 20th, 2011 14:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. I love how you've poetically depicted the dismal melancholy and deluded hopelessness. Excellent! Misery so well drawn.
January 20th, 2011 14:23
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Cheeky Missy said:
Pieces like this are so deep in pain and feeling that it seems dangerous to comment, for it is nothing light. You have excellently expressed the heartache, and I love how you concluded it on something like a hopeful note that you would love someone else, thereby forgetting what is killing you now.
January 17th, 2011 23:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Pieces like this are so deep in pain and feeling that it seems dangerous to comment, for it is nothing light. You have excellently expressed the heartache, and I love how you concluded it on something like a hopeful note that you would love someone else, thereby forgetting what is killing you now.
January 17th, 2011 23:44
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Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Impressive. I suspect you described it only too perfectly, from the little I've heard. Fascinating!
January 15th, 2011 12:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Impressive. I suspect you described it only too perfectly, from the little I've heard. Fascinating!
January 15th, 2011 12:22
