Comments received on poems by DarkkQueen



Sugar Coating? No.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME DQ ~ Thanks for a very positive video and a powerful poem which damns this spoiled generation of Teens who have everything ~ value nothing and wallow in depression. I'm happy ~ you're happy ~ we just want everybody to be happy ~ OK. I became a Teen in 1994 and I've been happy ever since ! Ever since 911 (11 September 2001) the new generation of Teens have thrived on depression ~ a gloom & doom generation ! I had a great day yesterday (A Wedding) ~ today (Church Amen) ~ tomorrow ~ work (I love my job). This is the message of the video (I hope everyone watches it !) BE HAPPY ~ yesterday ~ today ~ tomorrow ~ forever ! Count your positives ~ bury the negatives. Your poem is couched in very graphic language to give vent to your feelings ~ love the message ~ to teens to everybody FOR GOD'S SAKE ~ BE HAPPY ! Jesus is a great teacher and in the Sermon on the Mount he says "Those who are really HAPPY are : Empathetic ~ Humble ~ Pure in heart ~ Peacemakers ~ Those who suffer for a good cause. It's a Divine take on what your poem is saying. Thanks for caring and sharing ! Yours BRIAN.

July 17th, 2016 09:36

Sugar Coating? No.
lysistrata said:

There is a terrible sameness to the euphoria of alcohol and the euphoria of your words.
But your 'fucking' language does not provoke any thinking or feeling..

July 17th, 2016 07:11